It's awesome, i love it! u should keep on goin'.

Please update, I like it. For once in his life, Hojo is sorry for having to hurt someone, I like that. What will Sephiroth do to Zack? Sephiroth with pink hair, funny to picture. I think I'll get a picture of him and see what it looks like.

Pink hair? I love it! i wonder what he'll do to Zack's hair? lol! I really like so far, a few spelling errors but it's only human. There are also a few words you could use as opposed to some others you do use, like instead of 'stuff', you could say 'things'. Y'know, that kinda thing. Give us the next chappie soon! i wanna see more of Sephiroth! *Girlie squeak* Later!

Wow...thats what that comes to my mind now. As far as errors go, there aren't any that are too bad...just little grammer here and there, but nothing major. The story was good, fluid...I was able to follow it pretty well. Do tell me there will be other chapters...coz that one sure didn't seem like the end. Let me know when the next chapter is up.