 doodlescribe 2006-02-12 . chapter 2This is a very inviting story. You've certainly captured the 'feel' of the time and place and the voices of Jeremy, Isak, Henry and Elizabeth. I appreciate the effort to tie it to real places and events during the war. I'm scratching my head a bit about Wynnie, Elwyn/Ellie, Connor and D'arcy but that's part of the mystery! Your writing is very relaxed and natural. The action is aptly described, the characters are brought to life with well chosen detail. Thanks for sharing this story and I can't wait for more. |