YAY! Future Fenton Family Fun. Wootness...

BRAVO!!

Wow! That's all i can say! i can't wait for these! especvially the third generation, is that gonna be Danny and dam's grankids? Man i can't wait! and i've been wondering since you didn't really go in depth with it in this story, do the fenton four have any freidns besides eachother? that'd be aweseom! i can't wait to see what happens in return to Amity Park! Update soon, cuz you know i'l always be there to review, praise and offer advice!

Of course I'm going to follow the rest of the series. I can't wait until you put up The Phantoms: Return to Amity Park.

Bye!

(wipes tears away) You just had to make me cry didn't you!Man I should just stop readin' peoples' ANs, they make me cry!

I'm glad you liked the review, and don't worry, i've leatrned to be very patient with this sight, since i have to deal with my siblings day in a day out, but YES! AN UPDATE! LOL had to gte that out of my system. Now prepare for a hell of a long review, especially after that devil-may-care, "OH MY GOD I CAN"T BELEVIE IT ENDED THERE!" cliffhanger.
I liked the begining and getting into Vla's head since you don't really see her that much in this, i'm really surprised ehr and tucker arn't married yet, or that tuker didn't know about the kids, i figured he's be thier god-father or something (well i don't know how'd that woprk since Sam's jeweish and Danny's catholic, since TFBC special).
But still i gotta hand it to sam, if i was in her shoes, and my husband and for kids, went to battle the evilest, badest, bad guy on plante earth(or atleast he's become that) i'd faint and die from a dozen heart attacks!
and seeing her entire family stuck by the wrost attack in the world, my god i'd be shattered, so i love how in character you made sam in this, she's one of may favorite chracters on the show because she's such an awesome, independent, unique, rebellious and strong-willed indiviaul, kinda like me, cept i'm not goth, alth9ouhg i do like to werar black from time to time, and i'm slightly nicer, and more patient, and i'm soemwhat more open with my feelings, but other than that yeah.
NOW...comes the big question, HOW IN THE NAME OF GOD ARE THE PHANTOMs GONNA GET OUT OF THIS ONE! My heart was beating non fricken stop!
And WAY TRO GO LILY! I love her, she's so muhc like her mom and her dad, cuz she's strong and always ready to but her self in other's way, and i was hopping somehow she got out of this, and i was wonderign what danny was going to do, when he motioned for the toher kids to gte out of the way. I dion't blame them for being frozen, i'd be too, i love how realiostsic in terms of feelings and actions this is. And poor danny that's gotta be heart breakining as a FATHER of all things!
And i loved it how they combinded thier powers into Lily! Danny you're a genis! i love the sibling love in this, it's so good, and that battle seen,. was just perfect and how cool was it that the jewels on thier chest were glowing! i knew thpose things were for more than just decoration. and i loved the logic in danny's plan, how Rocoe gave lily hios mental focas and lukle gave her her healing abliity to keep her body from falling apart, and Dapphire has to neturalize it, and she gets control of another element! WE GET TO SEE HER POWER IN ACTION! AND SHE CONTROLS ELEMENTS! HOW SICKEINGLY SWEETWICKED IS THAT! and i los liked it how you even tied in thier genetics. you really ddin't leave anything out.
and about thast family moment: OH MY GOD THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL! Not touching enouhg to mak eme, cry, but then again i only cry when i'm sad or borken, anything else i just have such a moved feeling, and that was aesome! a total other side of danny, Father danny, and it was great, i love family moments, that juts make you want to cry!
now it's all up to Lily and Sapphire!! GIRLS RULE!
Sapphire's strike was AWESOMWE! Man she rocks! You wern't kidding when you said the girls were gonna come throuhg later, This is great! and i love how this heilihgts all four of them instead of just one, i hate it when it centers on one person, even in danny phantom it centers on all the characters as individuals instead of just danny.
and i loved daspphire's speech to Vlad! i could juist imagine vlad as his blasdt suddenly goesw whoosh and is gone like that(snaps fingers) Oh god i could just see his face and i'ms till craxcking up! he must've had the biggest fricken heart attack a half-dead guy could ever have!
and we even have ghost-hunter Valerie, hear to kick some serious **! Oh mkan Vlad is gonna regret even thinking of messing with the fentons or Phantoms i should say!
and i loved the ending! it was so cute, and i was laughing at Rocsoe mentalling Vlad, i'm not a sadist orantyhing but, he deserved that! and i loved the end, i could just imagine, everyone flying home in thier ghost forms, with danny vcarrying sam, for the end! THIS WAS A WICKED INCREDIBLE STORY!
A!(Faint from happiness!) YOU DEDICATED THIS TO ME! OH MY GOD! THANK YOU SO MUCH! I'VE REVIEWS A LOT OF STORIES AND ALL THE AUTHORS HAVE THANKSED ME AND HAVE BEEN HAPPY THAT I GAVE THEM HELP, CRITISM AND IDEAS, BUT NO ONES EVER DEDICATED A TRIOLOGY TO ME! I'm so happy i think i'm seriously going to cry! thank you so much! I love you! Oh my god! i can;t wait for Phantoms II the return! I guess all my long years of being a writter asince 13 and my attemots to publish my novel payed off (i'm sixteen and i wrote my first actuakl novel, as well as a ton of others i still have to type but this is my first competed one:writeen, typed, and mauscripoted, i just ahve to get it poublished, wish me luck1) but still thank you soi much! i wanna hug you! Thank you so much!

To answer you questions i lvoed this enmtitre story but my favotrite part was when Sapphire, luke and lily bysted roscoue and danny outta vlad's grip and beat the stuffiung outta him, their powr, their fighting, sam thriowing a fit(god i burst out laughing at that) i loved it all.
Pregual/sequal wise, i say go for it! either one would be awesoem, but i'd love a sequal and i chance to see these super cool phantom kids in action, and facing the trials of childhood, with ghost powers! poor danny and sam.
and i think this was incredible, it was very well written, very orginal, very ctreative, and you have an amazing story i wouldnt change a thing.
I look foreward toi the ending!

I'm really thankful for you telling us when your probably going to update. Thanks. And thank you for the little snippet for the next chapter. That's really suspensful. But I can wait because good author's take their time. And here are the answers to your questions:

1. Favorite moment in the entire story?

I would have to say when Sam, Tucker, Valerie and the children found Danny. I liked that part

2.Do you want a prequel and/or a sequel for this?

Heck YEAH!

3. In my next story, what do you think I could do better?

I don't really know because your writing is great. There is nothing I can say. Your plot line is good, your grammer, your spelling, everything is good.

Can't wait for the next chapter of The Phantoms. Peace!

~Beyonce's

1. Probably when most of Danny's family fight together:)

2. If you want to go for it:)

3. dunno :(

AWESOME! XD This is one of the best stories I've read! Keep up the great work! PLEASE update soon! ^^

wow, this story is a real thriller. i cant wait until this story is finished. but, then again, the internet is slow and everything else in the world gets in the way of typing. o well. :P

thanks for the great story (although unfinished :P kidding, im just a born critic :),

brittney

okay i loved the way this started! with Sam EXPLODING! I fell outtA MY SEAT LAUGHING! and everyone crashed intp eCHOTHER LIKE A EARTHQUAKE JUST HIT ON MAN! THAT was so funny! (sorry about the capsloick before) and thanks for answeing which twin is older, i knew it was Luke.
And i lved the scene where Roscue wakes up and is kidnnaped, i'm not sadicstic or asnything, but i usually like imprsionment seens where people get hurt, cuz when they get out of it, the bad guy alwaysa gets his cpomupions in te end, and Vlad sure as hell better gte his, but man he must be good, if even Roscoe's physic powers don't work! how the heck are they gonna get outta this mess! and i lovced when rosuce went crazy when he figured out who vlad was, i was cracking up!
AND WOW!! Sapphire's power is totally wesoem! If i evwer had to have a special power, i'd always wanted it to be to control the elements! THAT IS TOPTALLY WICKED! I can't wait to see her powers in action! I toally love it, and i haven't seen it yet! and poor lily shemust feel so left ouit, i can't wait to see what her special powers are...But SWEET! SHE CAN CONTROL TIME! That's incredible, and one hell of a cool power! can she freeze time too, she went back in it then back to the furture so could she stop it too? or speed it up! Man i love the powerrs your give them they're so cool! and very orginal and creative, you did a great job!
and it's about time vlad put two ans two together and figured out Danny had a son, man this guy has NOT done his homework, and he thinks he's got only one kid! Man i can't waiyt to se the look on his face when he sees three other halfas(er quartra technically) and two of them are female! and that bastard! threateign to kill a guy's kid right in front of him! that's low even for him!
ad i loved the rescue apperation, and i loved the twin's outfits, i like the color silver for lily, but honeslty i was thinking more of purple for her, but oh well i think she's aweosme, and he powerrs are totally wicked!And she CAN stop time? sweet (i wrote this while i was reading the chapter cuz i wanted to review before i forgot everything i was gonna say)
And when Vlad saw all four of them, i thought he was going to have a heart attack!
this chapter ran kinda long but that's okay cuz i loved it! And OH MY GOD! SAM WAS FURIOUS! I was cracking up, when she slapped the ** outta Vlad, literally!c Man was she **! i think she's more dangerous than Danny and her kids, and they're the ones with the ghost powers!LOL
I was dissapointed when they made lily sit out during the battle seen, but i guess he is their secret weapon, with her abilty to control time. This means Luke is the onyl one who doesn't ahve an offensive special powers, but withhis healing powers he's probably invincible!
And how aweosme was the five of them using the ghostly wail! since you haven;t sen the clone episode i'm not surprised you don't know that Vlad knew danny had the ghost wail from that episode, but i live in New York so i get the american episodes, but anyway that was incredible the strognest ghost attack ten folds, and Vlad doesn't ahve it! how super sick is that! The was incredible, Vlad got his ** kicked!
AND HOLY **! WHAT THE HELL KIND CLIFF HANGER WAS THAT! oyu toally build up the suspence they're about to die at the hands of Vlad's strongets attacks and you suddenly end, it and you already said you won't update for a while, man that's so wrong! oh and for the record i used to watch shamen king but i didn't really like it that much, it got kinda boring after a while. anyway update ASAp i can't wait to read the l;ast two chapters!

Cool powers:)

What a cliffhanger indeed! Excellent chapter. I hope the kids and Danny don't get hurt from what Vlad was doing. I really can't wait unil the next chapter. This is definetely going on my favorite stories list since it's one of the best stories I ever read. If you don't believe me, check out my favs list at the bottom of my profile nd you'll see this excellent story there.

~Cassie

SWEET! Keep up the great work! PLEASE update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next! ^^