Jesus.

This is an amazing story! Even though it would be even more amazing if it was continued!

*sighs contentedly*

oh my gosh!! i loved it!! oh so evil, but in such a good way!! hehe xx

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Whoa mind blowing. This is a ...different side of Hermione... She is so submissive and very unlike the fiery Gryffindor she was once. Doesn't she realize what the last dark lord did? Doesn't she realize what will happen with the reign of the new dark lord?!? Ok I know it's fan fiction but seriously... it bothered me her willingness to it all. Very well written but a tad scary... So dark, and well the whole thing about a Muggle-born Death Eater was well... frighteningly awkward. I would like to see what would happen though! That would be interesting Harry and Ron trying to destroy the new dark Lord all of a sudden Hermione is there with the dark mark on her arm, the looks on their faces would be interesting. What would they do? I would lock her up in St. Mungo's for going insane.

I don't understand how she couldn't hate Lucious a little for what he did even if she had grown to love him and understand him a bit more surely she would have felt anger towards him, distrust perhaps?

It really gets to me when she calls him master afterwards, she was always the proud know it all and well now she's not. Complete turn around!

Well just wanted to say good story, interesting and looking forward to the sequel. Good job.

Till next time

WOW .. that must be liek the best LMHG one-shots i've ever read.

OMG! That is the most awesome story I've ever read. I always loved Lucius' character, and pairing him with Hermione was just genius. Thanks for writing, and I think it's great where it ends now, though Lucius' point of view would bne interesting to read too. Keep it up!^-^

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P.S. I've written a Peter Pan fanfic, and I was wondering if you would read it. I know it needs a lot of work, so please review and give advice if you get the time. Thanks a bunch! ^-^

Disturbing. A good example of the Stockholm Syndrome, but... disturbing. And some of the descriptions are over the top. Too many words. Not as bad as your usual, but still, the reader gets the impression you're trying to "dazzle" with the descriptions.

Oh God! THIS IS SO EFFIN AWESOME! DEFINITELY DO A SEQUEL, PLEASE!

I felt really terrible for Hermione at first, however, then you had to go and turn her dark. Overall, I liked your dark romance.

Excellent story!

I love this story! It is a fantastic example of a Lucius/Hermione fic. and I can't wait to read the sequel! ;p

wow. that was amazing . i read it. n didnt review. hten i got my friend to read it n i am reviewing for both of us. and in short. we are lokig forward to the sequal . lolz

n im not reading every single story of yours .even though they are great

I just love your Lucius/Hermione stories where he shows his power and manipulations. I liked that Hermione did get her memories back but still care for her "master" and saved him. I'm looking forward to reading the story from Lucius perceptive.