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| Mew3692002 2006-07-25 ch 20,  | abusePretty good ending to a great story! Bravo! |
| Mew3692002 2006-07-25 ch 19, | abuseWow, Celebi rewound time to save them, thats pretty cool! Good chapter! |
| Mew3692002 2006-07-25 ch 18, | abuseOh Lorelei got killed? I never liked her as an elite four member, but having her get killed is pretty harsh, especially without even calling out any of her pokemon. |
| Mew3692002 2006-07-25 ch 17, | abuseI sense a battle brewing! Pretty good story so far, I wonder how the fight will play out? |
| Mew3692002 2006-07-25 ch 16, | abuseI wonder what pokemon the color triad has anyways? Must be some very powerful pokemon if they could take down team rocket! |
| Mew3692002 2006-07-25 ch 15, | abuseOh geez, Sandy and Conner are a BAD bunch! I hope Kamon and his friends will be ok! |
| Mew3692002 2006-07-25 ch 14, | abuseI wonder where giovonni went off to to train? Or maybe he's just not coming back to team rocket, perhaps he doesn't want any more of it. Good chapter! |
| Mew3692002 2006-07-25 ch 13, | abuseBoth Clair AND Lance? This is getting interesting... |
| Mew3692002 2006-07-25 ch 12, | abuseYou actually put a face on these team rocket grunts and scientists, not many people do that in their fics. I think thats a pretty good idea actually! Good chapter! |
| Mew3692002 2006-07-25 ch 11, | abuseNow they met Lance, if this story is anything like they game, they will kick butt! |
| Mew3692002 2006-07-25 ch 10, | abuseI wonder how they are going to get the word out to giovonni that they kidnapped his son? Nice chapter! |
| Mew3692002 2006-07-25 ch 9, | abuseTraining 24 hours a day!? Someones going to be sleep-deprived and a LITTLE cranky! |
| Dragon Master Cohl 2006-07-25 ch 20, | abuseKinda cool starting out. but the ending sucks. You killed off all those people. That's sick & wrong dude. |
| Mew3692002 2006-07-25 ch 8, | abuseThey met the three legendaries? I wonder if Entei, Suicune, and Raikou will help them in any way? |
| Mew3692002 2006-07-25 ch 7, | abuseSo he caught a sudowoodo, another rock type, should be interesting. I wonder what will happen once the rockets get at kamon (I mean, will they throw him in a cell or what?). |