Short and sweet and... and makes me want to cry. But in a GOOD way!

...how did I miss this? I've always looked at this relationship when it works, but your take on it doing anything *but* gave me chills, Kai. I like how he can see through her smiles, and that final line... brr.

~Sabe.

I don't really understand it!

And Sora-Kuro, if you thought that Zelos Killed Colette when it said that he stabbed her in the back, it's and expresion.

OMG! Zelos just killed Colette?!?!?!? o.O

I like it. It's so short and yet... it touches the heart.

Oh angst! Helpful hint: instead of "She didn't cry over nothing" it should be "she didn't cry over anything." Don't use double-negatives!

I like the last sentence.

I wouldn't suggest using "..." twice in one paragraph.