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| Carrie01 2007-05-11 ch 5,  | abuseThis is a really cute idea, although I'm not sure, over the long term, how interesting it's going to be. I tend to agree with the previous reviewer who suggested you should keep the diary going into Tabitha's teens. Seeing her progress as a witch could be really funny and and interesting to read. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! |
| oldfashionedgirl 2007-05-08 ch 5, | abuseLoved it! Write more! |
| Fantasyland 2007-05-08 ch 4, anon. | abuseFABULOUS...must I say more? |
| Fantasyland 2007-05-08 ch 3, anon. | abuseAnother great chapter! Loved it! |
| Fantasyland 2007-05-08 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis second chapter was good, but there's one thing I think you missed: Tabitha can do magic, and in the first chapter you even stated that she can do her homework with her magic. If she hates math, why, then, doesn't she just use magic? Otherwise, great going! |
| Fantasyland 2007-05-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey, this was great! I love the show "Bewitched" too. It's one of my favorites. The "Tabitha's diary" idea is really great, and I'm glad you wrote it down and posted it for others to read!! Keep writing! |
| -only-real-men-sparkle- 2007-02-19 ch 5, | abuseOMG this is so good plz right more i think the fic should have a bit more drama |
| DianeB 2007-01-28 ch 5, | abuseThis is very cute. I think you should continue this into TABiTha's teen years and beyond. It could take a while, but it would be very interesting to see her "grow up" in the pages of her journal - see how her life changes and how much magic she permits herself. The possibilities for writing are endless! Certainly it was determined on the show that she possessed more magical ability than her little brother, but whether or not she decides to use it (or *how* she decides) could be a pivotal thing in her life - same as it was for her mother. I say go for it! |
| Halliwell-Charmed 2006-07-31 ch 5, | abusei really like it it's good update soon |
| godgivendesire 2006-07-27 ch 5, | abusethat's so cute! |
| kawaii-peach14 2006-02-20 ch 1, | abuseCute ^__^ |
| Cadao 2006-02-13 ch 1, | abuseI can imagine Tabitha writing that... |
| Igiveup 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuseVery cute. |