This is an interesting crossover, and an interesting take on Shinji. I can tell why you had to leave the Angels and the battles out...it wouldn't work in this particular universe. It is quite good.

not bad at all. a little different as you are adding alot of characters from different stories. just don't forget that their has to be a point to this story.

Interesting story wish you would continue it and you can put this story in the Evangelion and Tenjiho Tenge crossover section now.

Well for a story with many crossovers in this case this should be put in the Tenjo Tenge and evangelion crossover section

I think you should give Bob powers similar to Chads from Bleach because in my mind the two remind me of each other as they are highly protective of their friends and are both human tanks. Also this is one of my favorite stories and I have had a good time reading it so far.

Strong yet compassionate with good sense of honor is what seems to describe shinji in this good story

Buy the way this story can be put in evangelion crossover category with tenjo tenge as the crossover

Man I love the story so far, must continue it, keep up the good work

What the fuck? You including the Shinmei Ryu style for Shinji! Ha! Fucking Mary Sue all the way with the way YOU'RE going for him! :lol:

Say why don't you rewrite a few chapters if you've got time to write a few stories? :lol:

This is an awesome fic, please update again. Too many fics get sent into obscurity that deserve attention. It's really good.

Snake and Tiger huh? You going to go for the whole Chinese Zodiac

I read this one and also are you sure you're not making Shinji too overpowered? Please be careful gunman thats all I ask of you. Plus Love Hina was a very dissapointing manga I might add the ending and the romance between Keitaro and Naru was just a sick joke and let me tell you something domestic violence is NOT funny no matter how many try to make it so.

Of all the girls of Love Hina anyone of them would have been a better partner for Keitaro then that red parasitic lifeform known as Naru Narusegawa. Keitaro's illusions can never last forever sooner or later the marriage is going to end in divorce is that the status of their marriage in Shinji Tenge? That is if you include the other Love Hina characters in your fic and if you have Kei paired with someone else or something like that.

As for the Ranma characters you've included two of my favourites Ranma and Shampoo. Ranma is a wild card and thats what I like about him plus one of his most humourous (and at times dramatic) traits was his tendency to make offhand comments but I thought of him as a good guy as you seem to have portrayed him. Anymore Ranma characters?

Also your portrayal of the Tenjho Tenge characters I liked as well most notably the Natsume sisters, Mastaka, Souichiro and Bob. So we going to see Bunsichi soon? Be interesting to see how Shinji, the Sailor Senshi, Ranma and Shampoo are going to relate to the guy.

Also I suppose we may be seeing the Enforcement groups boss Mitsuomi Takayanagi soon as well? I'm sure you agree he is a pretty cool villain any other adversaries in mind for Shinji and co. other then the executive council and their enforcers?

Are you sure you are not making Shinji over-powerful not only that you put him as a MALE student of that feminist Nazi wench Motoko? Who raised her sword against harmless innocent men for no reason other then some inane opinion of men? A hatred for which the reason is completely and utterly childish?

Keep Writing!

Great story so far, update soon.