great update to the story. I can't wait to see what'll come next. so much going on. Though now i'm wondering why akane is becoming distant. well hopefully the next chapter will reveal more.

great update to the story. I can't wait to see what'll come next. so much going on. Though now i'm wondering why akane is becoming distant. well hopefully the next chapter will reveal more.

Glad you updated, hope to read more soon.

Ok this is really getting good. I hope you don't decide to wait for more than 18 months to update again. Man Nabiki is really going to do this... I kind of wonder how the others will try and advance their own affections with Ranma before he goes.

V.

wow this story is bloody fantastic i beg you please update a.s.a.l.a. = as soon as life allows

Please update soon!

Quite interesting, I must say. With one of my favorite pairings, no less. I look forward to more. :)

Megatyrant out.

Man oh man what a chapter this was, keep up the good work, It took quite a while to get this onw an update, I want more ASAP, it's just to good to leave it here, keep up the good work

Woopah! Glad to see you back writing again, and really enjoyed this here next part. Something for me to keep looking on your web site to see if there was any updates, and then for the holiday, I get a huge bonus in my in box. Really enjoyed how things are going here, and have to wonder what all will happen as time runs out for Ranma, and what the implications are if his male side were to die, but the female remain, as well as his and Nabiki's developing relationship.

Hooyah! Glad to see you're still around and kickin'!

Hoping for more updates to your existing stories, and possibly new ones.

I'm hoping Ranma and Nabiki will do the deed more than just once (practice makes it better, after all), and looking forward to the repercussions when Nabiki comes up pregnant.

While Akane might consider the possibility of doing the same, I just can't see her as actually working up the nerve to broach the idea, especially after her past behavior and actions.

Ukyo...it's doubtful that would, at least that's my viewpoint. Not that she wouldn't take advantage of the opportunity, if it presented itself, but she's never struck me as the type that he all that eager for kids.

Shampoo...oh yeah! She's going to want a few rides on the Wild Horse, herself. And getting pregnant would definitely be the goal.

Kasumi...who can say, but wouldn't Ranma be shocked if she tried to seduce him before she loses her chance.

Kodachi...I see Ranma running and hiding.

Since the system will not let me edit or post a second posting on the same chapter I will say it on chapter one. One other point that I think has been missed by everyone is the Spring of Life if it has turned up at this point in your time-line. Also, I don't see not telling Ranma's belief on how he contacted cancer, Akane's cooking, is he going to let her continue to feed it to other people. Would he sit to the side and watch while she feeds it to someone else, just so she would not feel hurt. We have not seen Ryouga yet, so he likely does not know, how will he react and will he attack Ranma in a weakened state first injuring him before learning the truth? Still, with all this I have enjoying the read as it is a new spin. Looking forward to the next chapter when you are ready.

This is an excellent example of the Ranma X Nabiki that I like. I do think that Ranms is being dense about his curse, he does not have to die just lock it. At the worse he will be healthy til he dies and the best he will live to see his/her children grow up. Looking forward to the next chapter when you are ready.

Hey man, nice to see you writing again! Excellent addition, and I hope to see some more of this...

-W

Man this is too good to end it here, loving it so far, definatly different to say the least, must continue this, good way to bring everyone closser together, I can't wait to see how this ends, keep up the good work

this is a really interesting beginning and i would be more than eager to read more should you continue with it.