Reviews for Rivals For Life

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veteran Raven 2008-04-01 ch 1,	abusevery nice, this is the first armored core fic i read update soon
Dra Gan the Dragoniodian Ki... 2007-05-22 ch 19,	abuseNice chapter I just loved it, I hope that you will continue making such wonderful chapters. I did not see anything wrong, but a little bit more in depth description would help, but it makes me wish that my ps2 didn't break. ToT
Dra Gan the Dragoniodian Ki... 2007-05-08 ch 18,	abuseHey man, I will read that fic of your girlfriends, and I think that you did very well considering ye were using notepad, why don't you just download Openoffice it is even better than Microsoft office in my opinion at least and you can download it from this sites home page, word pad sucks, I know I had to type a double spaced essay in it one time shivers I will Never do that again, well I am busy writing chapter 5 of my Ac's and shotguns fic, and I hope to finally put some Ac action at least a little bit in this chapter, well Ja Ne!
Dra Gan the Dragoniodian Ki... 2006-08-28 ch 16,	abuseNice chapters, I really loved them, the only thing I saw that was off was that sometimes you used are when our seemed like a better choice. May you sword strike home, and your sheild never falter.
nexusmaster 2006-08-03 ch 15,	abuseI really like how you're making the story progress and how the characters are developing. A few confusing parts like with Dusk and Chaos, but the story is good none the less. Leave a review on my story, please I need to know what people think of it.
Mavrik Zero 2006-07-25 ch 13,	abusegood story there's a few typos but nothing major
armoreddude 2006-05-01 ch 1, anon.	abusemy three favorite stories have been updated! killer chapter also! keep them coming!
Dra Gan the Dragoniodian Ki... 2006-04-19 ch 11,	abuseman what a chapter, i couldnt stop laughing espicily in the first half. the only noticable thing wrong with this chapter is that I think that their is a w in wrap, besides that it was purrfect. Well I will wait pateintly for your next update and for your information chapter 4 of my Ac's and Shotguns fic is uploaded, so if you want to please read and review, if you want to the last chapter is long for me which is saying somthing. Well this is Dragan signing off. /Dragan's picture is cut off from the tv screen, that you were watching him on./
armoreddude 2006-04-04 ch 10, anon.	abuseThere are so many stories I just got into here and this was one of the first. Very nice.
Dra Gan the Dragoniodian Ki... 2006-03-25 ch 10,	abusehey man how are you doing, you were right in saying that your speling errors are almost non existant, but I noticed that you subsituted one word to another, making some parts alittle confusing to read but not much. But besided that your chapter was great, I ablsolutyly lobed it. And I cant wait till your next update. /Suddenly a giant cat busts the wall down, picks Dragan up by the scruff of his kneck and then leavs though the hole it created, after a few seconds you hear the words Ja Ne in the recesses of your mind in Dragans voice/
Hawk's Eyes 2006-03-24 ch 9,	abuseGreat chapter! Please update this soon.
Dra Gan the Dragoniodian Ki... 2006-03-18 ch 9,	abusehey how are you doing, i liked this chapter, a good story has more than just battles, and the like, this story is really good man, the only problem that i saw was a farly larg number of spelling errors like when you had Dusk sit on a chaos insted of a chair, but besides that it is all good. well i guess that i will leave you to your own devices. well bye. /Dragan then closes the door to the cockpit of his Ac and then ignites his boosters and flies through the silent line doging the satilite beams like they where nonthing./
Vanguarde 2006-03-12 ch 8,	abuseThat was totally awesome! I can't believe they can take such a beating! You shouldn't kill them off though; they have much potential. Great job, I just can't wait till the next one!
Dra Gan the Dragoniodian Ki... 2006-03-11 ch 8,	abuseyou didn't let me down, infact i am amased, the beauty of a well fought battle is beyond comparasion, i hope that you cdontinue to type battle as good as this one if not better. i didn't find anything wrong with this chapter so i will leave you to your own devices, for the tiem being atleast. /Dragan activates his gaient mech, and boosts away after a few seconds a blade set up hover ac joins him and they boost off into the sunset together./
Dra Gan the Dragoniodian Ki... 2006-03-07 ch 7,	abusehello how are you doing so it sounds like you had a rough weekend to, mine was lets see satuday, i had to dig up a utility pole which was box shape ensted of the usal round, and had this cinder block around it in the ground, sunday i was sick all day and monday and today i have been recovering from the weekend, my muscles are still sore from saterday. well back to the subject on hand, i loved this chapter and hope that your next one is as good as it sounds /Dragans eyes glaze over, and he starts mumbling stuff about Explosivos over and over for about a minute till you smack him up beside the head./ what happened their well back to wat i was talking about, i didn't find anything wrong with this chapter. and i have an idea bout what i think about that one emil he oppened i think that it involvs kaos and one of the judges daughters or wife, doing what well lets just say you would'nt want to get me started, because it could involve anything from date pictures to an ective involving a male siberian tiger, a camcorder, a labtop with internet uplink and some female siberian tiger phramones. [do you really want to know?] well bye. /Dragan climbs back into his massive white hevywight behemoth just as a squad of rpg loaded fuzzy pink bunny rabbits comes out of know where and starts firing upon Dragan who then lifs up the giant machine gun and lays wast to the rabbits before flying off into the rising full fifth moon./

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