YA I SO AGREE! GAAHINA RULEZ! SO DOES KAKAHINA, SASUHINA, NARUHINA, NEJIHINA, SHIKAHINA, ITAHINA, AND AND *runs out of breath* well you get it...

Very cute

lawl! hell yeah! gaahina rules! the bestest hina pairing might i add! gawsh i love 'em anything that has their name i'm in love with! yup ima hopless romantique! lol! i loved it wiv all my heart! you rule! XD

Chaa that was so sweet! o/o

Awesome!

I loved it, it was a good lemon!

i loved the story :) don't know about either of the people involved here, but this story makes me want to find out...well written and a good, short read

I loved this story, but there were a few lines I didn't quite understand what you meant:

"He licked the sweat that was starting to form her belly, they were both blocked but he knew it would not be too long"

What do you mean by 'blocked'?

There were a few other words that were a bit awkward or misused, and that took me out of the story, but overall this story was exellent!

seems like just a bunch of big words put together -.- that dnt even make sense

Love it! I love how they come together and how much gaara want hinata! Write more GaaHina fics please!

I just could imagine this so well. XD That scares me alitte...

You just converted me! I'm now a GaaHina fan! I hate you! Haha. Kidding. :p Love it! ;D

Omigosh!

I love crack pairings!

*drools*

fun times

Very nice! they would be up all night if they kept having non-stop sex. lolz. you go gaara-kun! you should write more gaahina stories. you're really good.