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Reviews for: Commitment
FireKai 5/7/09 . chapter 1
This story was very interesting. I liked the way you described Seto's senses mixed with his relationship with Jou. The ending was very good.
Echoe'sFolly 1/22/08 . chapter 1
now that you mention it, the manga-ka stuck the the signs pretty well. normally Scorpios are indeed people who love money and are stuck-up s.ob.'s .*no offense to the Scorpios out there, but u are.)

great fic, i luv how everything was ordered through the senses.

-s.o
Second Storey Stairwell 12/21/06 . chapter 1
Pretty good but should only be T
peanutbutterandbananas 8/30/06 . chapter 1
aww . . . the yayness of one of my favourite YGO couples! sehr hubsch!* please continue writing-it would be muxh appreciated!

*German for: it's cute!
misori 7/22/06 . chapter 1
M... clever clever clever. Good job! /thumbs up/ I do say this is so... different from most KaiJou fics, and I like it mostly because it's so easy to read, simple yet deep, and the fact that there's no angst. D Of course, I also like Hentai!Kaiba so it's all good. /huggles/ Well done, dear
kaixjouaddict 6/1/06 . chapter 1
I likes this one too. so you get a seto and jou plushie.
DarkAngel048 3/28/06 . chapter 1
good fic!
Misura 3/23/06 . chapter 1
I loved to read this set of snippets so cleverly connected by the theme of the five senses, especially since each snippet 'tasted' just a wee little bit different from the others, while still 'feeling' like part of the set. I think Touch and Sight were my favourites, though please don't ask me why; I haven't got a clue either. -
Smurfy20 3/7/06 . chapter 1
not bad and different. -thumbs up- gud on ya!

signed

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chittyco 3/4/06 . chapter 1
I like your stuff
mandapandabug 2/21/06 . chapter 1
that was fun some of the lines were very clever... i did enjoy this. very cute. well... reviewed you late... sorry, been busy. well anyways, write more and i'll review you later_
Growing Pain 2/11/06 . chapter 1
Hey, I liked this one-shot, so don't think lowly of it. It's very good actually. Never seen any go around the different senses like this, so you score originality points _ And the characterisation was very good too heh _
Sugarholic 2/11/06 . chapter 1
Cant belive no one has has reviewed this yet! Oh well I really lke your story.Doing the 5 senses plus an etra was an original touch.Yeah Im not an overall experienced writer but I know good fanfiction when I see it.Im guessing this is a one shot but please make more wonderful KJ fics soon. Ja.
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