FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination
| FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Saq78642 2007-09-10 ch 1,  | abuseOh so true. |
| xBlackxButterflyx 2007-09-10 ch 1, | abusei usually hate sakura but this is very original^^ |
| Hieigirl17 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abuseYou almost made me cry! Your story touches me because I know that there's no way that Sakura and Naruto will ever give up. |
| Takahashi Ayumi 2006-08-13 ch 1, | abuseAwesome job! You wrote from Sakura's pov very well. ^_^ Hope that we can expect more lie this one :] |
| cast14 2006-08-12 ch 1, | abusei loved the story i hope you write more like this one |
| Angel449 2006-03-29 ch 1, | abuseI can't believe that I didn't review this before! It is my favourite team 7 story. I like that you put it in Sakura's point of view and I like that you included Naruto in this. Sakura vowing to get Sasuke back gets old in fanfiction but the way you did it...I just loved it. The members of team 7 cae about each other a lot more then they let on and you portrayed that wonderfully. Excellent work and your spelling and grammar is great too. If you ever write a sequel to this or add another chapter...please personal message me because I would love to read it. |
| OpheliasGuard 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is quite the interesting story. It presents a familiar feeling, Aditou. ...Sasuke’s world is narrow and dark...messy and distorted, just a tiny bit crazy, and not at all appealing anymore. ...has room only for death, power, and vengeance. That’s it. And no matter how hard I coaxed or pushed or even begged, there was never any room for me, a pink-haired kunoichi who had never tasted death. Not like him. Does this bit have personal significance? It sounds like you really want to avoid that world Sasuke's in. Anyway, you're story's cool. |
| Janiqua 2006-02-20 ch 1, | abusePerfect. Beautiful. Stunning, and just like Sakura! I'm impressed. Now. Sequel. Right a longer version where Naruto and Sakura actually get Sasuke back. DO IT! |
| LeadYouIn 2006-02-12 ch 1, | abuseSo good...I love friendship stories between team 7! Awesome job! |
| Moonraker One 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is awesome. I really liked the imagery, and I though that the narration by Sakura was amazing. You put a lot of effort into the personality and spirituality, even, of Sasuke's biggest fangirl. You can actually feel her pain, love, and hope. Good job. |
| Tenshi-Battosai 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuseVery well written in Sakura's POV! ^_^ Sasuke's 'world' was wonderfully portrayed and the way she described that they'd knock some sense into him was very imaginative - loved it! Sayonara, Tenshi-Battosai |