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Rebecca Potter
2009-10-08 . chapter 21
Oh wow i haven't cried like that in a long time. it was so sad yet happy at the same time it was lovely. thank you
nintschibintschi
2009-09-06 . chapter 8
great story can not stop reading and its already midnight :)
nintschi
tobystephensfan
2009-08-25 . chapter 21
I loved this story so much! It's had me crying my eyes out! It was so beautifully written. Thank you!
Angel-Miko
2009-08-11 . chapter 21
really, truly an amazing story :)Good work :)
mooree
2009-07-28 . chapter 21
I jut loved your story. It made me cry, smile and laugh. Everything a good story has. I just wanted to tell you thank you for the story because it made my life brighter. I wanted to say I sorry about you aunt. Thank you for the wonderful story.
Elizabeth
DruidRaven2090
2009-07-14 . chapter 21
This was amazing. I loved every minute of it and can't wait to see what else you have written. Thank you for writing Behind the Rainbow. It wasn't quite what I was expecting, but I think it was better that way. "Normal is only a setting on a washing machine." -Raven
Snaperocks
2009-07-10 . chapter 21
This is a wonderful story, you should think about writing a sequal about the orphanage or something.
Rori Potter
2009-06-30 . chapter 21
That was aweomse. I loved this story and this chapter.
Nota Bene
2009-06-18 . chapter 3
I'm sorry about your aunt (even though it's been a few years).
I like the story so far, and can't wait to go ahead and read the rest of it. I'm hoping someone in the wizarding world, or hogwarts finds out that Harry's sick.

~~Estie~~
Nota Bene
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
Interesting...I haven't seen a plot like this yet-with the whole petunia, lily twist going on. Intriguing to imagine Harry more like Lily than like James...definitely hooked :)

~~Estie~~
Indry
2009-06-16 . chapter 21
Wow you have a way with words! This story made me cry.
princessfrankie
2009-06-07 . chapter 21
i loved this story! it's the perfect example of a bittersweet tale! good job!
tar heels superstar
2009-05-06 . chapter 21
great story but this was really sad and i can't wait for more so keep writing and i loved the ending. i think you should have a one-shot of harry from up above or something that would be great to.
darkyamicreator
2009-05-05 . chapter 21
A very well written and moving story, and it is very unfortunate that such things like cancer happen to the best of people.
Nicksilver156
2009-03-15 . chapter 21
Wow, just... wow. Your story really touched me in a way few stories ever had. I really loved this story and only had one or two problems with it as a whole.

On an emotional level I've never been touched by story like this one. On the last few chapters I couldn't keep my eyes dry. Considering I only got a little chocked up at the Titanic this is saying something. It almost seemed as if you reached though the monitor and started to squeeze my heart.

However on a technical level I had a bit of problem with the way everything except his illness was working out for Harry. It had no conflict except the race against time to finish all he wanted done before the end. It was like he said, "I wanted this done." and bam it happened. I think if you added a little conflict in to make him work for his goals a little; it would have fleshed the story out some.

On a whole you easily have one the best stories I've ever read here. I hope you keep writing to improve your talent.
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