Whew, I just had a thoroughly enjoyable re-read of this wonderful story! I've been searching for it forever and finally found it again, thank goodness.

I really loved all the suspenseful cliffhangers, your great at picking those out. The whole mystery aspect and who-dun-it investigation was great! You really had all the characters, well, in character and I loved your insight into Rodney's internal struggle. And of course I loved the whump factor, great job on that.

Fnatastic job on everything! Such a treat to be able to come back and read again, thanks so much for sharing your talent!

Wonderful story. I've been waiting a long time to read this one. I started it then realized it mentioned The Hive, and as I was rewatching Atlantis from the beginning I wanted to rewatch that ep before I read this story. Finally watched it this morning and I wasn't disappointed by the story. You really worked over almost everyone in this one, except Teyla :P

I only read SGA and I have read all of your stories. I'm so glad that I saved this one for last. Great story. Lots of people got a good whumping, several times, even Ronon, which is unusual.

The excitement! The horror! The suspense! The humor! The snark! The good times we had thanks to you!

Bye until the next story.

Wow this story had a bit of everything in it; mayhem, angst, adventure, and not to mention plenty of action. I am glad you did finish this story as it was very interesting to read. The plot was very enjoyable and I am glad almost everyone made it through. Killing off a not so main character was easier to deal with than a main character. Of course it was a happy time when Pope and the wraith died. Thank you for writing this story.

boosting the review count :)

Great story !

I really enjoyed this plenty of whump, intrigue and action.

That reminds me of Rod and John's conversation while playing golf.

‘Put your toys away before Dad gets home.’

Rolling here!

"The wraith watched it like a cobra fixated on the snake charmer"
Loved that image.

Hope no one tries too hard to save Pope.

Seriously, a broken arm and extra-large needle isn't nearly enough.

“Major Lorne said I could if the doc here breathed too deeply.”

“Well, you don’t want to disobey your direct officer’s orders.” That earned Sheppard a chuckle from the team that disappeared around the edge of the corridor.

It is wrong for me to hope he takes a good (last) deep breathe?

JT howled in pain when Ronon’s foot shattered bone like dried twigs in the man’s arm. “Let McKay go,” he growled, pressing his weight further onto the writhing body beneath his foot, ignoring JT’s harsh pleas for him to get off.

Go, Ronon, go!

...Any takers on who might leave a trail from a torn up chocolate powerbar wrapper? Anyone?”

Beuler? Beuler? Beuler?

Our favorite loyal watchdog, Ronon. And a cliffy as well!