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| Dias of All Final 2005-07-05 ch 6,  | abuseVery interesting. Shinji is ok because there are reasons but I think Asuka is a bit too OOC. Anyway, I hope you continue this. |
| Angeluz08 2005-04-05 ch 6, | abuseUhh... none of his other stories have been updated in i few years so i don't think he's cmoing to finish this. If you do come back please just finish this story. I like its course away from the original plot but theres something wrong with shinjis dad here |
| Blade 2005-03-27 ch 6, anon. | abusevery interesting story hope you update soon, cant wait to see what happens next :) |
| FatalFuryX 2004-05-03 ch 2, | abusea few spelling/grammer mistakes but otherwise good and there a bit...actually, REALLY OOC! but hey, your story, cya!!;) |
| roflecoptorroxxor 2004-04-08 ch 3, | abuseI love your story, but I find Shinji's new relationship with his father a little far-fetched. |
| roflecoptorroxxor 2004-03-28 ch 1, | abuseI love it. I really do! |
| nova10 2003-11-08 ch 6, | abuseHope you can clear your mind soon, cause I wanna know what will happen next! |
| Anon 2003-11-02 ch 6, anon. | abuseI do really think this should continue... |
| Danny 2003-04-16 ch 6, anon. | abuseThis story is SSO COL! I have never been so please with a story (well except for the Story "The Child Of Love"(really great)). Don't give it up! It seems that your last update was in 04/17/02 AND RIGHT NOW IS 04/15/03, MAN! PLZ finish this story. I am a Shinji/Asuka fan and on behave of all S/A fans plz continue. P.S: Oh, by the way GREAT STORY :D Danny |
| Lord Ru of Kato 2003-04-03 ch 6, | abuseMore more plz. i love the craziness. must see shinji tourture auska. must find out the commander's plan plz hurry. |
| Eric 2003-02-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat first chapter. |
| Dean Garrison 2003-02-10 ch 6, anon. | abuseGRRR!!! Please fininsh writing the other story soon!! I want to see what devious plan Gendo has for Asuka!! |
| Dean Garrison 2003-02-10 ch 6, anon. | abuseGRRR!!! Please fininsh writing the other story soon!! I want to see what devious plan Gendo has for Asuka!! |
| Hi! 2003-01-20 ch 2, anon. | abuseI see now by what you meant about your english. The only problem I saw so was that your suffixes are a bit mixed. It's still easy to understand though. The story's great! |
| Hi! 2003-01-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseYour english isn't that good? I didn't even notice. Keep up the good work!! |