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Nenne
2009-11-23 . chapter 23
That was an amazing story! I loved it.

The transition didn't seem forced or strange or even unnatural. This was really good.
ciara
2009-11-22 . chapter 23
cul u shud do it frm lucius POV
yue no rei
2009-10-13 . chapter 23
Haha nice story :D
SocialMisfitNumber86
2009-09-15 . chapter 23
*stands and applauds* that was beautiful at first when you brought in Lucius I wasn't too sure on it but then I kept reading and I have to say that was a lovely story and I'm sad to be at the end. I would have liked to have seen the Manor with the kids already in it. But I will give you Lucius' reaction at the end had me laughing hysterically. Wonderful story!
SM#86
Zoius and the Devil
2009-08-04 . chapter 23
aww, how sweet! Draco was a bit more goody-goody than i typically prefer, but utterly adorable nonetheless. and Lucius was awesome! haha i especially loved the ending.
-zozo
sasodei-iz-awesome
2009-07-27 . chapter 23
Wow! There was very light slash content but it was still so good to read! OMGosh, XD Lucius' reaction was hilarious, about the Manor. Whoo, this was totally original! Very, very, VERY well written as well. LOVED it.

Peace, love, and all that shit...
~Sasodeiizawesome~
Emily
2009-07-20 . chapter 1
I read a lot of stories on a lot of sites, i have to say this is one of the best I've read. I love the story line and how everyone is portrayed. i can't see anything that i would change, i truly love this story.
CodeRomance
2009-06-13 . chapter 23
HAHAA! the end was the best part! Lucius! hahaa that was great! I loved your story! absolutely amazing!
Tuuna
2009-06-04 . chapter 23
Great story :D I like how you portrayed Lucius, a bit mean in the beginning and then just resigned in a way :) I actually perfer it when they make him sufferable in the stories, rather than the evil M*F* he is ^^
Silverlynxcat
2009-05-20 . chapter 23
I /did/ wonder what Lucius' reaction would be to Draco's little idea with the manor.
A very original plot and very well written. I liked how you didn't play Draco off as the bad guy.
Although I did get hte urge to slap Ron once or twice x3
Adding Lucius to the program was also an interesting twist.
In short it was a great story. ^^
Choice
2009-05-14 . chapter 23
AWESOME!! (:

I'd ramble on and on about how fabtastic this story was, but it's extremely late and I don't have the patience to do so.

I'm definitely adding this to my Favorites list, and I plan on rereading it sometime in the future.

Keep up the great work!!
skinnyrita
2009-04-16 . chapter 23
Goodness, this story is fantastic on so many levels I just don't know where to start! Firstly, well done on such an excellent and original idea, I have never read a plot like it. I am curiously glad that it's working out for Lucius too, usually he pretends to reform and then turns again once people have turned a blind eye, and you've managed to make the situation and tenacious process believeable and with the up and down emotional mix that befits the story and the characters. Speaking of characters, my second area of congrats is for keeping the characters true to their original personalities, no one seemed OOC at all, and that can be really difficult to fit your plot around. All in all, I adored this and will be adding it and you to my favourites. I will check back soon to see what other goodies you have on offer on your page!
skinnyrita
chuffed4angst
2009-04-16 . chapter 9
*"He made sure that he only took an hour and a half to get ready that morning, just to prove to Harry he could."*

(snicker)

Way to show him, Draco!
Ali-chan et Vani-chan
2009-01-16 . chapter 23
What, no lemon? *shocked* lol I loved your fic! The characters were really IC.
keatlin
2009-01-10 . chapter 23
This is such a sweet story.
Lovely.
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