So I know this is over 8 years old but in my opinion it is terrible. Seriously, Grace and A.J have a great love story...when and how would she have slept with Michael. This whole thing is terribly thought out. I don't even know what else to say. You are obviously young, and immature at the time of writing this. And Victoria should have stopped this atrocious POS

Please update soon! Love Ben Affleck!

Might I suggest moving this to a more appropriate location - say the Scripts secion ?

im so confused explain please

great story so far! i love it! keep going! loved that twist with michael and the baby!

Brava! (Affleck, if you don't know who I am by that, you're hopeless.) Great chapter, but there were some grammatical errors. (Don't Punjab me for that! I'm to young to die!) Anyway, awesome job and update soon!

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I really like this story! Hope you'll update soon and make the chapter longer? _