Oh! That was adorable! I loved it! Poor Rae in the beginning. I like it when people add in things that we wouldn't know about and you did a great job adding in why Raven was afraid to love. I liked Sen's character, very mystic and the perfect matchmaker. Nice Work!

I really liked the big climax with the dance. I loved that the irony to Raven letting loose is ten times worse. Even more, I liked that it was when Beast Boy said those three simple words that she calmed down.

Last, but certainly not least, I adored the ending. It was so perfect. It was just the sort of thing that you want to see and it tied the story together in a pretty red bow. Beautiful! I'm working on finishing your other stories right now, so I'll review them some time this week. Keep writing!

Later!

~Rena

That is the best BB and Raven story I have ever read. I loved it.

That was beautiful. I am so happy for Beastboy and Raven.

"But you were too busy sleeping off 20 lbs, of past its sell-by date tofu." ~laughs~ I think that was my favorite line. The idea behind this is good, but I do have one main question: Who is Nakida and Sonia? I get that Nakida is Cyborgs girlfriend and Sonia's a hollogram, but where exactly did they come from? It seemed like they just sort of jumped in there.
There were some spelling errors, but again, the idea behind the story was sweet and clever, so good job with this. ^_^
~Mina~

Well besides a few of the things we talked about I really enjoyed this fic. I liked how Raven finally managed to get some emotion out of her, I'll see if I can reconmend this to a few BB/Raven lovers I know.

Personally I think for a one-shot this was done really well and I can't wait to see what you write next too.

Not too shabby. I liked it and think that you're getting better with each story.

that was so beautiful.im really serious.i loved it