It's been long enough since THE DISTRICT went off the air that I don't remember the episode "Running Towards Fire," but this is very believable, very realistic.

Feels very real.

Very nice. The way you portrayed both characters was very real, and the way you dived into the thoughts and emotions of both McGregor and Page, very good. I hope to read more of your stuff!

JediProphetess

Nice story, well done.

Great missing scene!