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Reviews For: Enveloping Shadow

Iceheart Firesoul
2006-07-31
ch 10, anon.
abuseAw... oh well. Good luck with your next story. :'(
Iceheart Firesoul
2006-04-20
ch 8,
abuse*grin* I like Kiev. And did P'Drin just get challenged to a drinking contest by the orc-man? Lol.
Iceheart Firesoul
2006-03-30
ch 7, anon.
abuseJarlaxle is trying to save P'Drin from herself...heh. Good luck with that one. I'm curious to see how Vierna fits in to this.
Lyra Waterflame
2006-03-19
ch 7,
abuseMore? Please? Sorry for taking so long to read this chappy, I've kinda outta it for a while... But I'd like to read more when you post it!
Kyanna Dune
2006-03-17
ch 1,
abusegood work!
Iceheart Firesoul
2006-03-05
ch 6,
abuseIn between being curious about Kiev and enjoying the rest of the story, I noticed one inconsistency: you said in the previous chapter that P'drin can't hold her liquor, and in this chapter she is liberally drinking in the middle of unfriendly territory, where she would presumably wish to remain sharp. Why?
Sword and Magic
2006-03-02
ch 6,
abuseInteresting story thus far. :) I hope you'll update it soon, so I can read more of it. :D
Lyra Waterflame
2006-03-01
ch 6,
abuseAh, what's Jarlaxle up to now?
More? Please?
Lyra Waterflame
2006-02-28
ch 5,
abuseMore? Please?
This just keeps getting more interesting every chapter!
Lyra Waterflame
2006-02-27
ch 3,
abuseMore? Please? Please please please?
Syreni
2006-02-22
ch 3,
abuselove the story so far keep it up! why is she so short though? she seems like a little person to me...
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