Ok, i liked most of this story but i can guarantee you that someone who nearly just got raped is definitely NOT about to stick their tongue down someone elses throat say twenty minutes later.
Her original feeling of wanting Oliver to stay away is correct. But going and crying in his arms is not.
Most likely she'd try to deny the whole thing and just stay away from guys for a while. If she told anyone it would probably be Alicia or Angie.

hey this is a great story!

Cute...somthing different(in a good way)...i like it...

nice job!

i think i read this one before but apparently i din't review. so here you go:

nice little story~ though the flint thing worried me a little. i don't understand what everybodies idea is with having flint want to rape katie bell? anyway, i liked your story you died a good job!
lady Arre

Cheers and claps. I think the ending was fine, very cute apart from the flint bit) x

i thought the ending was cute. well, not cute but, like a funny sort of cute. anywayz, that was a good one-shot. not many can pull it off

i really liked it olver and katie are such a good fit. nice job.

aw that was so cute :) you should write a full length story sometime!

aww That was a nice story :)

So cute!