That was sweet. I love stories like that. And your's, that one in particular, was one of the firsts I've read which took me in Kaito/Aoko's world. And because I promise to myself to review all stories I love in DC/MK fandom, than I do it. And I do it in chronological order, so as I mentioned before, that one particular story show me a little more Kaito/Aoko's world and made me addicted.
Your Kaito and Aoko are cute. I love their innocence, their uncertainty... something which made them special, though I don't know how to define it. I know that sunset, ocean and else may be little to sweet, but not for me :D I always love sweets :)
Really nice work.

GAH! THAT'S HORRIBLE! I'm hurt! You've stopped at that. T-T! Anyway, the story's really well-written, and I can't wait for the next update to come up! :D

This is by far the best chapter I've read from you. How you pooled all 35 themes in one fic is beyond me, simply amazing! :D

With the black rose as a hint, I kind of expected the ending but it was all still too much of a shock.. why did he have to die? x__x

But this chapter was well written, still. *looks at next chapter* WHAT IT'S LONGER WAH! XD *squeal*

Very, very sad... though it's just so like Kaito to put people he loves before himself. (you did get me there for a sec... I really thought he fell in love w/ another girl other than Aoko... in that case he better dig himself two graves - one for each half of his body XD) Please add another 30 kisses to ur fics - I just can't get enough of this DC/MK couple!

Of all the Kisses you've written, and heck, quite possibly of all the fics you've written (except perhaps for that little R-rated piece you posted on LJ, rawr~), this is quite possibly my favorite. I just adore it, and I reread it frequently ♥

I don't know if I've told you, but this is one of my absolute favorite Kisses of yours and I adore it :D Just an FYI. Also, every time I type the letters FYI, I nearly mistype and spell your name instead ^_^

He cherishes his father's memory more than most things, but when it comes down to it he would even use it to protect that one he loves most. He truly is a fool in love, but I can't help but pity the both of them. Update!

Yay! Loveliness again!
For the first half I was cheering for the proposal scenario, but then you turned it around and it became THAT MUCH BETTER. XD
(Is an angst whore ^^')

I keep visualising Aoko screaming 'Get out of here!' because it's such a ... pretty scene. I've been trying to doodle it in class, so hehe, you can see how much of an impression this 'Kiss' made on me.

Can't wait for the grand finale!
(But I kinda wish this wasn't finishing either :/ )

It IS rather depressing, but you wrote it so well it doesn't matter <3 broke my heart all the same... And, oh, last but one. I'm going to miss this ;o;

*sighs* that was a bit of a depressing story :(
But a good chapter anyways!!
Can't wait until the last one!

Good chapter, I enjoyed it.

that was so sad

Ohh, you know I love that one. I told you already. I just couldn't tell you what in it... well, thepart where Kaito is depressed after his breakup is pretty awesome. Yes indeed. (God, I love how you write him. He's always so great!)

The end, of course, is absolutely sweet. Which makes me think, I'd love to see you write something dark one day... XD no, I'm not prodding. Not at all.

...And now I'm imagining Kaito in a Kiss The Cook apron.

That was... random. Sweet, but random. I think I liked your earlier 'Kisses' more. The premise you started off with was very nice, I liked how you made it so that they were completely oblivious and yet the whole situation seemed perfectly natural and credible. But... something wasn't quite right. :/ I think I missed the linking.

(Eep! I can't believe I'm criticising Fyliwion-sama. FORGIVE ME!)

Please write more though, I enjoy reading everything of yours ^^