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RurouniKenshin-chan
2008-06-30
ch 14,
abusethis story
is really interesting
its kind of sad though
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Otaku's Moon
2008-06-01
ch 14,
abuseYAY! WOT WOT GO KENSHIN! HE DID SOMETHING RIGHT FOR ONCE! he made her HAPPY!!
Otaku's Moon
2008-06-01
ch 7,
abuseFINE! i'll give kenshin a break. he is trying harder, plus he is gonna take the shall.
Otaku's Moon
2008-06-01
ch 6,
abusehm, she isn't worried that kenshin will fall for megumi is she? well, i guess i would in her situation...
Otaku's Moon
2008-06-01
ch 4,
abusehmm...ya know it's intresting, kenshin says he's being a pervert, when he is in fact her husband. i mean, i think she would like that, ne? it still ** me off that he didn't make love to her on their honeymoon. i mean, that probably makes her feel like he doesn't desire her!

luv,
taku-chan
Otaku's Moon
2008-06-01
ch 3,
abuse*sigh* kenshins an **. as a woman, i think i know why she is sad. I mean, besides the whole fact that he didn't make love to her on their honeymoon, nor did they go to that one place, nor did he comfort her when she cried, nor did he pay attention to her, i mean, he just didn't try. he couldn't even give her children! I'm sure it also hurts her when he calls her "kaoru dono" i mean, it's so DISTANT! perhaps she suspects him of cheating, or maybe still loving tomoe. well, in anycase, it's a great story! you do fantastic angsts along with happy one! gambate-kudasai!

love,
otaku-chan

PS: i really hope kenshin gets his act together before it's too late.
skenshingumi
2008-05-17
ch 15,
abuseI am glad you finally brought them together and I was glad that Kenshin finally started to let his feelings out about Kaoru even if he couldn't completely verbalize them. I do find that he is setting himself up for a fall though if he thinks they can just ignore all that went before as if they are new people. Sooner or later, Kaoru has to tell him how he hurt her and he has to face that and resolve it both within himself and with her before I can imagine that they can truly recover and move forward. I did like how Kenshin proclaims he wants 12 kids. That was a cute way of showing he plans to stick around for a long time.
Evelyn
2008-05-16
ch 15, anon.
abuseWow today must be my lucky day, 2 updates! I love you! lol. I love this story... I commend you for the major shift in characterness and time setting for this ff and Mornings after. It must be hard. How DO you do it?! lol. I don't think I could pull a ff with ruroken's meiji setting. This is a really happy chapter and all the love making is making me grin like an idiot. Not because I some pervert, I'm just so glad to see the couple beginning to work things out. i think its cute kenshin teases her and express his feelings. kawaii.. I'm probably slow on this.. but Kaoru had a miscarriage ne? She just covered that fact up to Kenshin saying its her friend. If it is Kaoru.. I'm dying to find out Kenshin's reaction when he finds out his wife had a miscarriage. How will he react? Devastated I bet. Awesome love making chapter and I'm looking forward to chapter 16.
Scarred Sword Heart
2008-05-16
ch 15,
abuseAll I can say is: About time they did it.
ChieriAn9eL
2008-05-16
ch 15,
abuseyay! things are starting to look better... hope to see the next chapter soon
antica
2008-05-16
ch 15,
abusesqueals and jumps up and down

amazing i love it love it love it ... i hope Kaoru stays with him in the morning

update soon
flaming-amber
2008-05-16
ch 15,
abuseaw... I remember the first time I read this fic. It really broke my heart. I mean the angst was just incredible. I was sit in my room, on my bed, and tears would literally just fall because I feel like I can really connect with her pain... I mean, you love the man so much and yet, you have this insecurity that you cannot shake... that he might not love you the same...

anyways, this chapter brought a smile to my face... sometimes I find myself reading fics just to give myself reassurance that even if its just in fiction, happy endings can happen after the not-so-happy-middle part...
Icy
2008-05-16
ch 15, anon.
abuseNow that...is crazy in love.
Love this chapter.
poems2songs
2008-05-16
ch 15,
abusegreat update... glad that kenshin & kaoru are making a effort to improve their marriage... hope everything works out in the end... update when you can... please and thank you...
Dark Rose
2008-04-29
ch 14, anon.
abusei hope you haven't abandoned this story! it is very good. also very confusing but that is what keeps me reading. what happened at the festival??! it is driving my crazy now! an earlier chapter said he cheated on Kaoru, i would have never thought that Kenshin would be the type to cheat since he is so strong with honor and guilt driven by his past and in the manga and anime, Kaoru's happiness is the most important thing to him that i cannot imagine he'd do something to compromise his vow to protect her happiness. please explain soon?!!

great story nonetheless! keep up the great job and i can't wait for what's next!!
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