Wonderful set-up, great characterizations and very nice pacing.

Damn rufus, so damn confusing :D anyway, love the story & wanna know what happens next!

Wow, this looks promising. Though Rufus and Reno are not exactly my favourite pairing, so far this fic is doing a wonderful job capturing their personalities. Will keep an eye out for updates, I'm curious to know what will happen next.

This is really good. I like the balance in the characters and there is no fanon in either of them. Well written.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Not a bad start. I wanna know whats gonna happen next.