I enjoyed your story so very much. It was very true to Narnia and the characters were acting just the way they are supposed to.

Thank you for writing such a wonderful story. :)

nice

rather strange but alright

Thank you; this was a lovely story. I was ready to smack Caspian around the head for running off to use the Gateway without permission, and laughed madly at the opening chapter. My only criticism is that I was hoping for some sort of closure with Rilami in the final chapter.

Overall, excellent. Thank you!

This was a wonderful story and a real pleasure to read. Everything was magnificent - the characterization of all our favorite people, the Gateway, and especially Aslan's dialog. (He's the character I find hardest to write for.) This whole story couldn't have been an easy task and I'm glad you undertook it. Great job!

Wow, great chapter! Peter and the professor, and the painting? Ingenious. As for Caspian, I do love dream sequences, and yours was marvelously executed. To tell you the truth I forgot about the time-twist myself, and now poor Caspian remembers it too late? It's so great. ]

Another good chapter. I tell you, there are few authors that could have carved out such a great story from the idea that Caspian and his friends would somehow get to England. And reading it, I can't help but smile. These AU stories sometimes get boring as they go on, but I'm only getting more excited! This is one great story.

Yes, yes, this is where it starts getting good! I can't praise this chapter enough. You've painted such a clear picture, it's incredible. The three of them stick out like sore thumbs! I loved the scene where Caspian defends the lady's honor. It must have taken such work to produce such a chapter, because you built this story from nothing. It's just fabulous.

Great chapter! We all know Caspian has that awful streak of adventure and pride. I can't believe he would totally ditch Aslan on the beach and go for the torch. . . But at the same time, I can, because your writing is so very believable. The scene between Drinian and the albatross was very well done.

Ooh, exciting! Your writing is as good as ever, and have I mentioned how much I love the way you handle all the characters? Drinian, Trumpkin, Trufflehunter and Caspian himself are all perfectly done.

This chapter felt a little slow, but it was still intriguing. At least Caspian's getting into being a king again. . .

This chapter does a great job of setting things up. Your writing styles boasts humor and thoughtfulness, and I'm already getting into it again. ]

My favorite bit: "marshwiggles were excellent company for people in low spirits" -Loved it!

This is a nice start to a story I should have finished reviewing for a year ago! I don't like Caspian shipped with anyone else besides Lucy, but you gave his wife some decent characterization. I do love the idea of all the Narnians spying on the pair of them.

Remarkable. Just the way you pulled it off was so totally realistic. . . I loved it, especially because you managed to get Peter in there!

Wonderful job! This is one of my favorite Narnia fics. Even though you said you weren't going to try to make Aslan very god-like, I think you did a great job, especially with Drinian and the albatross. I was a little disappointed we didn't get to see Eustace, Lucy and Edmund too, but I'm so glad the Prof and Polly were there! :D