Oh. My. God.
That was, the WORST possible...
Mary-Sue in the universe. (Shudders) My God, everything... gyahh! You just gave... raghh.

Good story... HORRIBLE Mary-Sue. (Isn't that what you were going for, anyway? Lol.)
Cookie for you!
-Basket-

"Oh.My.God. You don't love me?"
Brillant. I was laughing so hard, I probably woke up my parents...its a wonder how much they sleep through when I'm on FF. Seriously, that was GENIUS. No wonder you won first place! It was amazing! I could picture Erik twictching...hahaha..or should I say..Gerik? ;)
Lovely! Loved it all! :D
.heart.angel.

Omigod that was hilarious! Robot Mary Sue! I would so like to throw it out the window and watch it fall to its sickeningly sweet death too! Gosh, I hate those types. Same thing with vicious phangirls, though I am one, just not...vicious. Okeedoke,I'll get out of your hair.

*holds in laughter but fails miserably* Ha ha! This was most entertaining, dear authoress.

cheers,

Caroline Butler

Oh my! This was SO funny! LOL! Machine gun jumblies! LMAO!

It's even funnier the second time you read it! I love it still. I'm glad that you won the contest Rel. See you later!

Now I can see why it won 1st place. Great job, it's so funny! ...I was >< that close to bursting out laughing in the library at school. lol, but it's wonderful. brava!

:D You made me happy. xD

Very enjoyable.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I'm sorry, but that wasn't very stupid to me :D THAT was vastly entertaining! The mental pictures alone...so sorry, but I have to go laugh my head off some more ;D

I will love you FOREVER!

Hilarious!

Ha! I love it.

That was oddly amusing.

Cheers,
Ari/Reina

Yes! The end of the Mary Sue! This is very funny!