My pet peeve (& I am sure I am not alone), is talented fan fic writers who write a suspenseful story, only to leave their supportive readers hanging with a grt cliffhanger & not respecting them enuff to give them the ending they all trusted you to provide. I am sure you have your reasons and you may not even be reading these reviews anymore but if you are, PLEASE just give us an ending.

WHY WASN'T THIS UPDATED?
*breathes*
Well, I won't rant about wanting more. Though I do.
I feel I must tell you that these lines: "Betrayal is the art of deception taken to its most extreme" and "She stood on a precipice overlooking forever, and there wasn’t a soul within sight that she trusted enough to help her" are pure poetry. Deserve applause. Those last two chapters particularily had EXCELLENT lines that are unfortunately too long for me to copy/paste here.
Beautiful, honestly. The descriptions, the writing, the imagery--it was all incredible. Felt like I was there.
This may in fact be one of the best fics I have ever read, and although it has been two years, I think, I will hope a little that more may come...
Again, wonderful job. I am impressed.

Love it so far, can't wait to read more!

Oh no, I didn't notice that this wasn't complete! Now I've done exactly what I dread... gotten caught up in an excellent story that hasn't an ending, and that hasn't been updated in almost 2 years. This truly is heartbreaking. Such an amazing story, great plot, characterization, allusions... it deserves to be finished.

Thanks for the 6 chapters it does have, they were exceptional.

Awesome fic!

Wow...I hope Booth doesn't die. Then Brennan would die and that would suck. I better go now, Mother let the dog in my room and she is slobbing on everything in sight...

OMG this has to be the best story I’ve ever read, your references to the past, art and emotion is just brilliant. I really hope you continue to write. You have much talent. I’d like to know how you knew of the painting. I looked it up after you referred to it and the dynamics to it connecting to the story is just beautiful. I wish to see more of your work. The story itself has such a real emotion to it.
Good luck.
A

Damn, this is excellent work, but the last updated date is giving me nightmares. I do hope you haven't abandoned it. (Can we interest you in a one-shot, if there's no time to finish the WIP : -- good writing is always a delight to find.)

OMG NO! WHAT HAPPENDS? I NEED TO KNOW!

*coughs* Okay, I'm fine. Really. Please, hurry with the next chapter, I'm so worried about both Booth and Brennan...

OKAY! They wrote a WHOLE episode for you! The upcomming ep? Bones burried, Booth to the rescue...c'mon now! They were listening to the reviews wanting something like this in the show! They did it for you!

*grin* Can ya tell? We want more? Tell 'real life' the writers of Bones are even working with you...maybe they want more!? HA!

Smoochies,
Alamo

OMG-- I was watching Bones and the preview for next week's episode is freakishly similar to this!! I think some of the Bones writers have been reading some fanfiction... lol...

Love your story so far. Hope you post more chapters soon...the cliffhanger is driving me crazy. The last chapter especially was well written where Booth is laying over her grave. Great description of the emotions flowing between the two...feels like you are there. Keep up the great work -give us more please. Much more! I hope you don't end it just when he rescues her. Please take it beyond and maybe have him take her back to his place to stay since I'm sure she will be having nightmares etc. Just an idea. Good way for them to consumate their newly RECOGNIZED love for each other too.

I've just reread this story and I'm really hoping you haven't given up on it. Please finish it, please!

I really, really hope you haven't given up on this story. It's way too good to do that. Please please update soon!

AARRGGHH! How can you leave them like that!

Please, write the next part and have Booth rescue Bones!

I love your writing style.