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| Malvolia 2006-05-12 ch 1, | abusePoignant is indeed the word for this fic. Interesting to see how Julia's feelings don't all falling in line with her programming, and how she fights that and wants to yield to it at the same time. Well done on the ending, too; a nice sense of completion to this fic. |
| Lady Kate 2006-02-13 ch 1, | abuseGreat character piece – and a poignant tribute to Volkov, and all the early astronauts/cosmonauts. I thought the bickering children were particularly well done, especially in the context of such a short story, and I could certainly see why Julia dreaded field trips. All the more surprising, then, when she gets a question that challenges her. Oh and I had to laugh at the little snippet about "that pilot and his girlfriend". :-) |