wow, really well written!

worked out great

thanks for sharing

DF

EK!

ARH!

that made me so happy!:D

Love NCISchick xoxoxo

make it longer

Hey there i think you should make it longer it was very good.

Took me a slight minute to get it but I got it. So cute:)

Ha! awesome job...very creative...i wasn't sure what it was at the beginning! i was like "what is this" but then i realized oh she's giving birth! haha...very nice work! i loved it! fantastic job...keep it up!

Great one-shot! Funny as!

heh. i just got it! well, it took me a while. probably because it's really late at night. only 10:54, pm. still late. this is good. funny. i like it. :D

HAHAHA! This is ingenious! love it!

LoL... that was funny... I loved it... wish there was more to it..

*sits in puzzlement*

... *gets it* AHAHAHAHAHHA

LOL freaking hilarious!

Ha! Loved it, totally what I picture them giving birth would be like:) Awesome.

ROFL! That was HILARIOUS! LOL!

I LOVED it! But I can't believe that's all you're giving us. *pouts* Boo.

LOL!

LOVED IT! Wish there was more!

mandi *_*

LOL! That was good!