You are not foolish. I wish for resucue also. I believe in Narnia.

Wow. Stunning. I loved it. But you're not foolish. Haven't all Narnia fans felt this way? Haven't we all longed to leave and join Aslan in His world, to be with Him forever? Absolutely wonderful, this piece, I think it inspired me to write some more poems/fics.

~DevilishAngel112, the slightly deranged author who is a firm believer in the existance of Narnia (be it "heaven" or the "real narnia").

I don't think you are foolish. I think the same thing. I don't want to be an adult if that is all it is to the world. It's like that poem, come away human child, the world is so full of woe. I hope that when I die I can go to worlds like Narnia. If not there might as well be nothing.

Beautiful. It makes me feel so sad. Sometimes I wish I could go to Narnia too! -sighs happily-

I feel just the same way! It was a tearjerker, by the way..

Oh my God... I was reading this aloud to myself... and it sounds EXACTLY how I feel. Is it true, that I'm not the only one who feels this way? I'm not alone?
Damn, thank you for writing this... at least SOMEBODY did.

I started to cry, this story is truely how we all feel...for the place of longing. (Which drives us crazy, becuase it seems so real but we'll never be able to go there.)

~W.G.B

Teh angst. Life is rough sometimes. I know how you feel. It was especially odd for me because I'm usually a very grounded, practical person (to the extent that I squash other peoples' dreams) but when I saw Narnia, for days afterwards I was listless and depressed. I wanted to desperately to belong to a family like the Pevensies, to be protected and loved in the way. Don't get me wrong, my family was wonderful, I just wished so fervently that I could try a different life for once.

Might I reccomend looking at my profile? I wrote a poem of a similar nature there, and not to be arrogant but I like it very much.

WAH.H.H. i feel like i know exactly how you feel. i used to go sit in my closet and wonder if my coat would be warm enough when i'd finally get there. ::sigh::

you should go to capegio's profile and read what she has up. it captures the feeling perfectly.

and oh yes, beautifully written.

*tears up* Aw! Haven't we all felt this way? I really liked the last bit ('Before I fall beneath this weight, come and rescue me. Please, Aslan, before it’s too late…'), especially how it rhymed. I'm also reading your other fic, Once Upon a Depression, but I don't think I've reviewed yet... I will when you put the next chapter up! *grins, hint hint* Well anyway, this was wonderful! Keep writing!