|Reviews for Darien|
| WyldClaw 1/30/13 . chapter 1
Boy bedtime has his work cut out for him
| TakeCareBear 10/25/09 . chapter 16
Great end to the story... can't wait to read more work from you!
| Alexander-Crossover 10/11/09 . chapter 16
Great conclusion, mariel, I love the way this turned out. I like how Darien finally got things resolved. I hope others like this story as much as I do
| Kamen Rider Neos 10/11/09 . chapter 16
wonderfull story! i loved the ending.
keep up the awesome work!
| WyldClaw 10/11/09 . chapter 16
I think it is great that Darien has decided to stay with the care bears. I think that by being a part of their family his personality will change for the better.
Faith is cute! I liked her and Regal's little coversation over where the eggs had shells in them or not
| WyldClaw 7/7/09 . chapter 13
Now i am starting to feel sorry for Darien. He probably thinks that it is his fault that the men killed Samuel and left him alive
| TakeCareBear 7/7/09 . chapter 13
I'm still a tad speechless after reading this. Interesting backstory on Darien, it explains so much. Wonderful writing as usual, I look forward to more.
| NebulaBelt 7/7/09 . chapter 13
Wow. Pretty intense past there.
Also? Running around in a cloud kingdom is not such a great idea. They should put up a sign, 'Warning: Land's End'
| TakeCareBear 7/5/09 . chapter 12
Wonderful conversations b/t the characters.
Soulful's so sweet with Faith, and I really thought his conversation with Hope was meaningful. I like the way he guides her to the decision to talk to Darien.
Look forward to more.
| Kamen Rider Neos 7/3/09 . chapter 12
Hey, great chapter Mariel... I'm Heart-Will-Wolf from DeviantArt.
i'm very curious to see what comes next..
Loved the part between Faith and Soulful Heart!
Keep up the awesome work!
| NebulaBelt 7/3/09 . chapter 12
Really great chapter! Love the Soulful-Faith itnerraction, and the Hope stuff too. Really sweet. XD
| TakeCareBear 6/17/09 . chapter 11
Too bad the pranksters had to face punishment though... awesome pranks!
Nice conversation between Regal and Darien - very well written.
| Alexander-Crossover 6/16/09 . chapter 11
those three pranksters sure had it coming too them. Good writing mariel
| WyldClaw 6/15/09 . chapter 9
I feel so bad for hope. She thought that Darien would be able to adapt to the care bears lifestyle and open up his feelings a bit more but now she's having doubts
| TakeCareBear 6/14/09 . chapter 10
Wow! Just finished reading the latest Chapter.
I love how Noble Heart just ignores him when he says "damn." You use Noble Heart in some of same ways I do, much like a father figure.
Wonderful work so far, and as I've already said, great use of Take Care Bear. I think you may use her better than I do! :)
Look forward to more, very, very soon.