Boy bedtime has his work cut out for him

Great end to the story... can't wait to read more work from you!

Great conclusion, mariel, I love the way this turned out. I like how Darien finally got things resolved. I hope others like this story as much as I do

wonderfull story! i loved the ending.

keep up the awesome work!

I think it is great that Darien has decided to stay with the care bears. I think that by being a part of their family his personality will change for the better.

Faith is cute! I liked her and Regal's little coversation over where the eggs had shells in them or not

Now i am starting to feel sorry for Darien. He probably thinks that it is his fault that the men killed Samuel and left him alive

I'm still a tad speechless after reading this. Interesting backstory on Darien, it explains so much. Wonderful writing as usual, I look forward to more.

Wow. Pretty intense past there.

Also? Running around in a cloud kingdom is not such a great idea. They should put up a sign, 'Warning: Land's End'

Wonderful conversations b/t the characters.

Soulful's so sweet with Faith, and I really thought his conversation with Hope was meaningful. I like the way he guides her to the decision to talk to Darien.

Look forward to more.

Hey, great chapter Mariel... I'm Heart-Will-Wolf from DeviantArt.

i'm very curious to see what comes next..

Loved the part between Faith and Soulful Heart!

Keep up the awesome work!

Really great chapter! Love the Soulful-Faith itnerraction, and the Hope stuff too. Really sweet. XD

Nice!

Too bad the pranksters had to face punishment though... awesome pranks!

Nice conversation between Regal and Darien - very well written.

TTFN,

TCB

those three pranksters sure had it coming too them. Good writing mariel

I feel so bad for hope. She thought that Darien would be able to adapt to the care bears lifestyle and open up his feelings a bit more but now she's having doubts

Wow! Just finished reading the latest Chapter.

I love how Noble Heart just ignores him when he says "damn." You use Noble Heart in some of same ways I do, much like a father figure.

Wonderful work so far, and as I've already said, great use of Take Care Bear. I think you may use her better than I do! :)

Look forward to more, very, very soon.