hey finally read this one
aw poor kaiba
plus i read lots of sparrington fics sweet
go to search type in "frankly my dear, i don't give a damn"
and search it through PotC
it ain't sparrington but it's funny

Very well written. Excellent idea using repetition like that! Loved it! ^_^

Aw, no Azureshipping? *pout* Ah, well. This was a pretty good read nonetheless. You have some grammar errors about mid-way through, near the end, that you might want to fix