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| VampGrlz271 2008-07-06 ch 1,  | abuseLike it a lot. |
| Techno-Poet 2008-07-01 ch 1, | abuseThat's like, whoa! at the end, when all of a sudden, we just realize that it's edward. Whoa! Awesome! |
| XXxxxxxXXXX 2008-06-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseare u onna write more? or...is that just it? |
| La-Mer-De-Lune 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseokay. 1. bronze hair 2. stephenie wrote that her vampires didn't have any pointed fangs so there wouldn't be just those neat little two wounds. 3. vampires don't smoke, do they? but aside from that it was absolutely amazing. really. and is she gonna kill him or will he somehow resist? please update, it's too good to be left a one shot!! |
| tellulah-belle 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseit is no wonder this story won. I love it! I was really intrigued by the way the story ended. I like how this story is just enough because the characters already have background and feeling. |
| Moonpetal Lily 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abuseMrow? That was so wicked! I liked the use of first person...but the end left me anxious. How did she react to that, and how was it related to the earlier stuff? I'm so confuddled! |
| Jeshickah Knight 2007-11-10 ch 1, | abuseVery cool! I absolutely love casting Bella as a vampire...she's just too perfect for the role. But putting Edward in the final victem's role was priceless, I love it!! Just, isn't Edward's hair reddish-brown and not sandy blonde? Just a little point, no big deal, love the story! Absolutely Awesome!! Loves hugs & Blessed Be Jakki K* |
| xKissxAtxTwilightx 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abuseBeautifuly brilliant! I would've loved for you to extend it.^^ |
| d666lisa 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abusebrilliant totally brilliant :-) |
| alphamaniax 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseAwesome it would be amazing if you updated though. Okay yeah this is late but the reason is that i am going backward on the stories. The ones on the aback are much more well written. I like the role reversal thing. |
| alphamaniax 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseAwesome it would be amazing if you updated though. Okay yeah this is late but the reason is that i am going backward on the stories. The ones on the aback are much more well written. I like the role reversal thing. |
| Taz 2007-04-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseOmfg I loved "Angel" I think it would be so awesome if you made more parts to it! |
| xBREAKiNGFREE 2007-04-15 ch 1, | abuseWell, you definitely deserved to win. :] This was very original and well-written; I really liked it. |
| yourock 2007-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseno freaking wonder you won the comp. that was freaking awesome |
| Tatum 2007-03-01 ch 1, anon. | abusenice. You totally deserved whatever award you won. |