Reviews for Heir to the Empire

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JustinD 2008-09-28 ch 8,	abusegreat fanfic. with a great conclusion.
Guardoflight 2008-09-22 ch 8,	abuseThis is a very great read, informative but very well planned a just very interesting. The only thing I wonder is who does Ranma marry? As much as I doubt their would be one but a sequel would be great. All in all I hope you enjoyed writing this very good works of fictions
hellhound-d.o.w. 2008-09-17 ch 8,	abuseExcellent story. Never really get tired of reading it. I would like to see a sequel to it though, maybe about the Jurians, to really bring some finality to the fic. You made so many hints to what could be that it kinda left us hanging at the end. Also kinda curious about the partial fic at the end of chapter 8. I would like to see a complete form of that as it also peaks the curiousity. Keep up the good work.
gatodepatasblancas 2008-07-10 ch 3,	abuseHello there. I have read this Fantastic history, an I should say "you write good histories". Just an observation. In the scene when Cologne defeat the demon in "the Rite of Ascension", Lint calls her "Cologne-chan", but that's incorrect, "chan" is a _japanese_ honorific and they were in the middle of a forest in _China_. Thank you.
Nearly Indi-cent 2008-07-03 ch 1,	abuseI'm reading this for the second time, Its just that good. I dont think I reviewed the first time much so here goes. I ADORE the SME. The way its a functioning empire is great. I like the history and battles. The idea of battleships and super weapons is brilliant. It also makes sense, they built the Mercury Computer, why not a giant nuke? Although if they were that powerful, why did they fall to Queen Metaria?
moritynz 2008-06-22 ch 8,	abuseThat was cool. thanks for the good read
Nearly Indi-cent 2008-05-15 ch 8,	abuseI was gunning for Ranma/Setsuna so I am going to pretend it happened. I loved this, very well done, Amazing Indeed. I liked the military aspect, I liked how they are taking over the world. The amazon worship of Beryl was very good. All and all a great read
Violet Shadows 2008-04-21 ch 8,	abuseExcellent, definitely room for a sequal, I imagine it would have a very Ender's game feel to it.
. 2008-04-04 ch 8, anon.	abuseVEGETA?
kitsune potter 2008-03-02 ch 8,	abusethat is a sneaky move, there i had never thought of that until i relzied both the bold and identifications, but i never thought of that as a paring until you pointed it out, good one to
Rhyssia 2008-02-17 ch 8,	abuseOccasionally, I have to go back and read this. But I think this is the first time I read Alpha. Gonna continue it? ;)
greivergf 2007-12-29 ch 8,	abuseplease continue the story in a sequel it has so must potenal with the tenchi story of how they deal with the juraians maybe make an allience with washu or tokimi to get back their planets it would depend on when you base the tenchi timeline and the tenchi series is it the OVAs (ryho ooki) or universe but it would be a great story since the only simeral ones are goddes dellemma and parth of chaos that comes close arigato greivergf
GeorgeTobor 2007-12-05 ch 8,	abuseYou don't make good fics, you write GREAT fics. I have the first seven chapters on my palm and have read the story over a dozen times. The ending is better than any I imagined, Power, Chaos, and the schools are not joined! I really don't like genma getting his way! Now you just have to finish the story of Ranma goddess of luck. Oh and the wait was worth it.
sscrivener 2007-11-30 ch 4,	abuseI second (or is it third?) the motion for you to continue this story. It's one of my favorites. Judging by Usa's reactions, especially toward Nodoka, Ranma did something to let the NWC (or certain members thereof) live as long as the Senshi. She also gave Kasumi silver magical-girl hair, since Usa wondered why Kasumi had brown hair. If Kasumi and Nodoka are there, the other Tendo girls (at the very least) are also there, as would Ryoga (Warrior #1) and Kuno (retainer #1) be. I won't speculate which of the Inners gets Ryoga... but I think you could have a lot of fun with that. In some fics, after all, Minako and Makoto don't seem to mind sharing. That could have possibilities. :) In this particular story, the only matchup I see Ranma with would be Setsuna. They were and are the best of friends, and "friends with benefits" would come into play since Ranma's male body is available. I think it'd take very little to get them into bed together, especially since Ranma has already noted just how attractive Setsuna is. In all seriousness... any time you care to continue this fic, we'll be more than happy to read it. ^_^
hagancameron 2007-11-16 ch 8,	abuseAll i want for the holidays now is a continuation of this story. That is all. But just got done reading this one and as with the others, it was a great read, and Ranma's reactions and feelings i believe would be similar to the ones that you portrayed in this story. Keep up the good work.

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