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   rqgenevieve 11/12/11 . chapter 18AHAHAHA! Oh my gosh. Love it when Naru hits Umino! I was re-reading this book and I had totally forgotten all the funny parts. So glad I'm reading it again! GO LIZZY! , rqgenevieve |
| VAlvr04 1/2/11 . chapter 28 Great story! I hope there is a sequel or something. |
| Aldi82 8/10/10 . chapter 1 Wow loved it |
| FuturePrincess 6/12/10 . chapter 13 Wow, poor guy is a complete mess. Motoki already had experienced four strokes and two heart attacks….and one bizarre bladder failure, but this news tore him apart. loved that line fyi. |
| FuturePrincess 6/12/10 . chapter 7 Nice little scene there with Usagi's parents! |
| FuturePrincess 6/12/10 . chapter 6 Hmmm... I dunno how I feel about this whole first kiss business. I mean, she'd just been attacked! But overall nicely done. |
| FuturePrincess 6/12/10 . chapter 5 Go Mamoru! That Akio guy is a super creep - they should send him to jail. Just a thought (I know its a little late but w.e. lol) |
| FuturePrincess 6/12/10 . chapter 4 Your idea of Mamoru is quite possessive, huh? Poor guy. He always gets tortured. Haha |
| FuturePrincess 6/12/10 . chapter 3 Akio really is quite disgusting... It actually really bothers me that Usagi is so young and mamoru is like... 21? It's a bit weird. I think at 21 you really cant be dating that age - maybe if she's like 18. The anime is weird cuz she's like only 2 years younger than him in the manga? Something like that. |
| FuturePrincess 6/12/10 . chapter 2 Haha, so Akio isn't nice? Weird. I just thought you were gonna say that he's some bigwig at their college. Btw, when you mention college you might wanna give it a name (this is just something that bothers me specifically because there are so many so it is at least called 'their college' not 'the college') |
| FuturePrincess 6/12/10 . chapter 1 Your faithful reviewer is back! I really do enjoy the fact that you stick to the characters as is because (at least I find) it's hard to relate to the characters as portrayed in the anime. The caution - just in general - is grammar (I hate to be the annoying one mentioning this because I make grammar mistakes ALL the time). However, if you refine that in your writing you'll really hit gold and that's why I mention it. I think you get caught up with just writing it out (or possibly this is age related? I'm not sure how old you are - this is actually kinda embarrassing because the adult content you write is super adult but then the other scenes beforehand indicate a much more youthful person so I dunno how to take it.) and not refining it. Refine and you seriously have gold. I'm still obviously going to read! Overall, nicely done! |
| chimichurri 1/15/10 . chapter 28 Nice! |
| chimichurri 1/14/10 . chapter 22 Do you always start your stories with thunderstorms? lol Well, this is another great story! I really like your style! Can't wait to read more, 22 Chapters down, 6 more to go _ |
| zoned-out 1/5/10 . chapter 22 no condom :O uh oh! |
| Nena Moon 9/23/09 . chapter 28 thats the end ? (sad face) |
