Oh my gosh! My eyes were glued to the computer! The action scenes were so real! Other than a few grammatical errors that was perfect! Please tell me that you will write more!

Sincerely,
Meredith

Go Sunpaw! Is darkstar dead? In the series I hated riverclan for trying to steal Sunningrocks all the time, but your story made me want them to have it back!

UPDATE SOON!

OMG THIS STORY IS SO GOOD! YOU MUST UPDATE SOON! PLEASE! I AM ADDING THIS TO MY FAVES!

oh wow! thats terible! who'd have thougth thunder clan could be so evil! i like your idea of things though, you kind of mixed it up a bit making the hero clan the evil clan! looking forward to an update!

Dear Sunbattle,

Why have you stopped with your story?! I got really into it and then you stopped! Yours seemed really good, so I'll be upset if you don't continue with it! But I guess that's your choice...


~Sincerely~
Meredith

Your story rocks! It is similar to mine and I love it! Keep writing because you are an amazing author! (My main character is Sunpaw too!) Except my Sunpaw has a different personality, but in RiverClan as well. My story is based thirty years after Firestar. I hope you get the next chapter up soon!

Sincerely,
Meredith Merton

This is the best story I have ever read on Fanfiction! It's so realistic, like how Erin Hunter writes. Please, please continue it soon!

YAY YOU UPDATED!

NO! KEEP GOING! NEED MORE!

the new chapters are exellent their interesting and full of detail keep it up ^_^

another great chapter :)

great updates tonight :) i hope there more soon. and sunpaw is going to be a great warrior :)

oh no sunpaw! great chapter

Hey, great job! This is the best chapter so far!

Reedpaw should be renamed Grumpypaw. He is always grumpy and snappish. Great story! Please continue!