 desmond ishmael. 2008-05-18 . chapter 1poor taichi for being stuck in this situation. *sighh*
:( i hate to say it, but i love the sadness. haha. |
 SillyPuttyEnemies 2008-05-17 . chapter 1I love this story. =D.
I hope you updated soon. |
 anon. 2008-04-11 . chapter 10 that incest rally grossed me out.
but besides that it is an excellent story, very compelling.
yamato+taichi should get together. |
 V 2008-04-09 . chapter 6 I love this story, thank you for finally updating. I Just love Taisuke, so please update again soon. Thanks |
 anon_anna 2008-04-07 . chapter 10 Are you aware of just how sick a person you are? Would it be okay for you to sleep with one of your relatives? Incest is illegal and you should be ashamed of yourself. |
 anon_anna 2008-04-07 . chapter 10 I thought this story was so good until incest was brought into it. And it's surprising how everything is Yamato's fault. Nothing is Daisuke's or Takeru's is it? What about Daisuke chasing him the moment he got back. Even Yamato could see it. Are the other digidestined stupid. Miyako even called it out when she showed up. I'm just disappointed. I guess it's just not as good as I thought it was. I wanted them to work through their problems and here come the two dumbasses who should be with each other. Who goes after their double? That's just sick. why would you want to sleep with yourself. This is a sick story and I don't think it should be up for younger people to access. |
 FanKnight 2008-04-05 . chapter 10=D YES! AN UPDATE!
Thank you Lavey-sama! |
 KoumiLoccness 2008-04-04 . chapter 10Nice chap yo! Taito foe Life even though Taichis my third fav lol stiL Taito/Taisuke luv to the end.. Koumi Fan out much luv dont forget to vote on my pollz now... |
 Gerwin 2008-03-21 . chapter 9 Hey i can't wait for the next chapter. You are such a great writer and i was moved by how you handle the characters well. I hope you'll release the next chapter cuz really I can't wait ^_^ |
 Artistic18 2007-10-17 . chapter 9Wow. This chapter was definitely intense. Everything's all twisted and stuff. The next chapter outta be real interesting. |
 sinful ang3l 2007-07-19 . chapter 9omg. i can't wait for more. o_O |
 Lira-chan 2007-07-07 . chapter 7More story~ *gets with the commentating*
O~o~o~oh, we’re back to that club! I’m also amused to no end that the ghost is still bothering Daisuke. His train of thought is so much fun. And OH MY GOD. Yay for cross-dressers! xD I am so pleased with this.
Aw~w~wu, Sora’s outfit sounds cute to me! ^^ Actually, I think I just like everyone’s outfits in general. Hee!
And OH! Takeru pulled the ghost card on Daisuke. xD Ahaha, this is all so very amusing~ As a matter of fact, this whole scene reminds me of ANOTHER fanfic I’d read, except then it was Iori outnumbered and being dressed up like a goth. xP
Lolita dress! That’s PERFECT. :D And the panties and the nylons and Daisuke putting them on all carefully – I love how he reasons that if he’s going to cross-dress he doesn’t want to do it badly.
“she said you probably weren't –comfortable- enough as a –man- to cross-dress”
Oh my GOD, that’s delightfully underhanded. I love that line.
"These aren't shoes! They're torture devices!"
I like that line too. :D
I also point out that if you could convince someone to draw everyone in their outfits from this chapter it would be AWESOME.
And Takeru using Daisuke to get some guy to back off. Snuggles. Gods, you’re horrible to the boy.
AND TAICHI SHOWS UP. Poor Hikari panicking. And aww! After they get things worked out, Sora and Hikari are so cute! ;o;
Taichi teasing Takeru. Hee. I know he’s joking, but Taichi calling Takeru a pervert made me snicker. Pot calling kettle much?
Poor Daisuke worrying. And Taichi saying he looked like a hot girl! Hee!
Not much to say on the rest of the chapter. It’s too bad Taichi and Yamato fought but I’m not really surprised. And Taichi staying over at Daisuke’s probably won’t help matters, but still. It was a fun chapter! Again, I really do like this fic. ^^ |
 Lira-chan 2007-07-04 . chapter 6STILL READING! :D
"Eight hours of data entry and math lay stretched before him, like the Sahara desert before a man with no water and only 5 SPF sunscreen."
I liked that line. ^^
I've been wondering how Taichi got this job, especially if he hates it so much. Huh. I'm also kind of amused by Taichi's misfortune with the computer and his throwing his chair against the wall. xD
AND DAISUKE SHOWS UP! Yay!
This is kind of late in coming, but I think it's cute that Daisuke still calls Taichi "Taichi-senpai." I see him not stopping with that, but especially even after being away for so long... *shrug* Not sure what I'm trying to say here. I'm also amused that Yamato is "the wife." xP
Bringing up stalker Jun. Hee!
Oh, Daisuke kind of set Taichi up? :O For a job proposal. This is kind of cool, but I think if I was Taichi I'd be hesitant, just like he is. The whole "well, if I'm fired they won't give me my old job back, will they?" thing makes this a difficult decision for Taichi to make, I'm sure. But it sounds like a good deal in the end! Yay! Taichi should be happy~
Semi-randomly, are there ever scene breaks in this? I didn't really notice before now, but that doesn't seem to be the case. Just a dumb little nitpick. I only figured there would be a break in between "Gimme the test." and "The look on Yamato's face..." FFN can be kind of a ** with formatting so I wasn't sure if the lack of break was purposeful. Whatever the case, I'm probably just being anal.
Awu. The end of the chapter is sexy-sweet. Have I told you lately how much I love you? Anyway. Those are my impressions for the chapter! I do like this story ever so. ^^ |
 Lira-chan 2007-07-04 . chapter 5'Nother chapter! *gets to the commentating*
Oh, Takeru and Ken? I'm not big on the pairing, but can totally handle it being written as sort of a humor kind of thing, which I trust is the case due to what I know about pairings in this fic. :D
AND YAMATO SPYING ON THEM! */CAPS!abuse* Lira is amused. ^^ I'm also amused by Yamato's train of though. I enjoy the way you write most (if not all!) of these characters.
This whole scene feels sort of... The word I want isn't "cliche," 'cause it's a -GOOD- thing, whatever this mood is. Just kind of over-the-top in a humorous fashion. Does that work?
I'm totally getting Yamakeru vibes from this entire scene and am still surprised at how long it took that one reviewer to cotton on. Maybe she was just in denial.
The bit about Taichi and this not being "the old days" made me kind of sad/wistful. ;o;
What did Ken do? :O Am I supposed to know? 'Cause I'm not sure.
*is chuckling over Yamato getting "caught"* Oh my gods. I love you.
And oh my GOD. Daisuke is spying too. *so very amused* And oh, bringing up Taichi. Bad move?
The ghost comes up again! *snickers*
You spelled "ridiculous" as "rediculous." *nitpicks -- lovingly!*
AND TAICHI SHOWS UP. So much stalking going on in this chapter!
Ken isn't gay? :O My Ken is just so very, very gay. I think I knew that yours kind of wasn't, though, so this doesn't throw me for THAT big of a loop. xD Does your Ken hook up with Miyako and have several clone babies, though? 'Cause my Miyako can be perfectly straight, but I dunno how good of a mother she'd make.
And that's about it! I really am enjoying your fic and would like to actually talk to you about Digimon and your writing again, in addition to writing rant-y reviews. ^^ |
 babier 2007-07-04 . chapter 9lols. one ** up relationship between takeru and yamato. i feel really sorry for tai cuz he didnt cheat on yamato with daisuke. :( well yamato really messed up big time. and i actually feel as if daisuke does have a chance. hes so generous poor lil guy hope he ends up with someone in the end. well even if yamato does still love tai he really ** up and he doesnt even want to try to get tai back. guess tai's feeling pretty ** and hateful. well im really curious about the next chapter and its a really interesting fic. really original too!! so please update soon!! |