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| kristine;P 2008-08-25 ch 14, anon. | abusethats good! keep writing! i love too read the end! (Cause it is an and right??) |
| ReJo 2008-04-12 ch 14,  | abuseI'm so glad you updated! |
| Elainhe 2008-04-11 ch 14, | abuseLoved this bit in there: "“You’re beautiful.” I stated simply as I watched her look out the window. Her hair was blowing softly from the air coming in the slightly open window. She just seemed alive, like the country air had reinvigorated her." So simple, so beautiful. This remains very interesting. |
| Elainhe 2008-04-11 ch 12, | abuseLoved Riley and the easy coversation in this chapter. |
| Elainhe 2008-04-11 ch 11, | abuseA, the case is really getting inetersting. I'm curious about the fenced in 'church'. I am really, really glad that you are keeping them the CSIs I know them to be, not having them over react to teh case. They'te aware of th etrangenous of it, but not whimpering away from it. Great work. |
| Elainhe 2008-04-11 ch 7, | abuseOkay, I'm catching up. Perfect last few paragraphs. Freaky case indeed, but that is part of what makes it interesting. Looking forward to see how this unfolds. |
| wjobsessed 2008-04-11 ch 14, | abuseWow! Very nice to see updates to one of my favorite DL stories. Please don't make us wait months for the next chapter. Inquiring minds want to know! |
| Joanne 2007-08-13 ch 13, anon. | abuseI just read this for the first time and I really enjoyed it. Great job on the characters and I love the storyline. Please update soon. |
| serenity2bliss 2007-07-09 ch 13, | abuseHey,an update! yay! I loved the phone-mixing-up part...i think that was really cute! And also the part where Lindsay asked about their relationship from here out...loved Danny's response.I think that was really sweet ;) |
| chili-peppers 2007-07-08 ch 13, | abuseYey! I love this fic! Loved this chapter! Great job. Can't wait for more! |
| JennCorinthos 2007-07-06 ch 13, | abuseAnother great chapter... Loved this... They are together YEAH! Can't wait to read the next chapter... JENNIFER |
| ameriker 2007-07-06 ch 13, | abuseGREAT update! they are SO awesome together! I could picture the entire chapter! :D |
| ReJo 2007-07-06 ch 13, | abuseI am SO happy you updated **does a happy dance** Can't wait for another chapter! |
| ReJo 2007-07-06 ch 4, | abuseThis is my second time reading this. What a great story! I'm relieved that she answered the phone, and even though the tension is thick, they're reconnecting. YAY!! PLEASE CONTINUE |
| Dakota Storm 2007-07-05 ch 13, | abuseNice Story I found it very interesting to read. |