Obi and Maul don't fail to deliver. I think Obi would even look scrumptious in a drag but Maul..? Well, as long as he's fun and games ;) I bet the laugh torture was invented by Maul's master.

GL is a slave driver, but he's definitely got my vote :D

OH MY GOSH YOU KILLED JARJAR! Good story. I didn't particulary like JarJar that much. It also makes sense that Maul and Obi Wan would be pranksters. Keep up the good work!

Redneck626

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...::cough:: ::cough:: ::hack:: ::hack:: ::clears throat::...

OMG! This was so funny! Please write more of these. I loved the part were Obi can't get his lightsaber to work. That was hilarious.

::grins:: That was GREAT! I especially loved

[Obi and Qui-Gon have entered the conference room]

TC-14: My Master will be with you shortly...

[The droid leaves. Obi and Qui remove their thick hoods]

Obi: I have a bad feeling about this...

Qui: [smug] I don't sense anything.

Obi: [frowns] It's not about the mission, Master... It's something elsewhere... Elusive...

Qui: Don't center on your anxiety Obi-Wan. Keep your concentration here and now where it belongs.

Obi: But Master Yoda said that mindful of the future I should be, yes, hrrhm...

[Qui gives Obi a funny look]

Obi: [frowns] Well he did. It's so hard to figure out what he's saying sometimes...

Yoda: [offscreen] Heard that I did! Anymore insolence from you, and your ass I shall kick!

::snickers:: Anyhow ... will we be seeing more of this?

That was awsome! It really cracked me up, keep up the good work!

This is HILLAROUS! Write more! Here's a suggestion:

(On the ballcony in Courecaunt)

Maul: Master, are you sure you should lean so far?

Sideous: Hey, this balcony is pefectly capable of suportting my weeeeeegharrrrrgh!

This is likely the most hilarious Star Wars fic I've read. Let's see... how many times did Jar-Jar die? I look forward to reading more, it's almost too funny!

:falls over and busts because she is lughing so hard. ag entrails fly everywhere.:

This is some funny (sorry a bit blunt there, eh?). Very humerous.

there is a genious among us! and I can't spell! Do more and make alot os sad individiuals like myself v.happy. By the way, what were you on when you wrote this? And where can I get some?

Oh, this is good. All genius. I laughed non-stop through all the parts. Write more of these!

LOL.. Love the gas! that was great!

That was good and the part where obi-wan falls it was actully 80 feet

ROTFLMAO!