 Illusion of the Mirror 2008-03-25 . chapter 1"That's right, Square-Enix. I said Lockheart, not Lockhart. Bastards."
Hear, hear! ^^
By the way, I throughly enjoyed this story. *faves* |
 robertmarilyn 2007-12-24 . chapter 1I love your writing. This was so funny. I really think that you should do a second chapter and have the events from Vincent's perspective. Oh, and then a third chapter that continues where these the first two left off. Yeah, that'd be great! :-)
Keep up the Vincent/Tifa stories...your Elena/Reno stories are wonderful too.
mar |
 Shari Joy Rose 2007-09-10 . chapter 1I think this was the best VinTi 'fic I've read so far. Really well written and actually in character! - which is hard to do, resulting in tons of stories that are labeles VinTi but could be .. Sally and Fred for all the similarities they have to the actual characters. So really, kudos to you, I'm impressed, and too happy to finally find a FFVII story worth reading. |
 MindTricks 2007-07-18 . chapter 1Arg, I love your stories! Great. Just fantastic. Oh, and by the way, the "Pick me up" one you wrote...very funny. I just wanted to say that, because I forgot to say it in that review and you should know it, because comedy's very hard to write. And this one is fantastic too. Okay. I have to go read another one.
~MindTricks |
 Sargent Snarky 2007-07-13 . chapter 1I like Valentine's Day. I've never been on a date, never been asked on one and don't really intend on going on one any time soon. I like guys well enough, but... hmm. I suppose I'm not romantically inclined. But I still like Valentine's Day. Mother gives me a box of chocolates, and on February 15th, all the Candy Stores sell /their/ left-over chocolates at bargain prices. =) It's not the honey - it's the chocolate.
By that's irrelevant, and this review is supposed to be on the story, not on my fondness for sweets or my preferences. So, I'll shut up about that and move on...
I quite enjoyed this story. The awkward, hesitent Vincent is very well done, and Tifa makes me smile. I almost feel sorry for Vincent for being so unbearably... frozen. But, it wouldn't be quite the same if he was aggressive and overbearing. The presence of the earing (or lack of the earing) throughout and Vincent's fixation on it was an excellent centerpiece for the narrative.
All in all, a wonderful job.
- Snarky |
 Viva-taquitos 2006-09-02 . chapter 1Yeah, Single Awareness Day sucks.
But this was incredibally cute. Very original idea, might I add. |
 Cathartic Trance 2006-08-12 . chapter 1Aw, that was so heartwarming! I liked the last line "But... he hoped that Tifa Lockheart would lose her jewellery more often." So cute! And I especially enjoyed how you interpreted their characters so nicely. I've been finding that difficult to do lately -_- Well, I hope to see more from you soon!
Amazing job,
Crimson Tears |
 Kairyuu-san 2006-06-20 . chapter 1Aw! I loved that! It was so good! I especially liked how you described Vincent's emotions and actions. You are such a great writer.
And yeah . . . I guess once you start reading Vincent x Tifa fics it's hard to stop. |
 Switchback 2006-05-27 . chapter 1That's so sweet. Vincent rocks! And yeah, LockHEART not HART! ... Bastards... ANYWAY! Nice work. I love it. |
 Sixth Night 2006-05-15 . chapter 1Very lovely story! I really like the style of your writing. |
 c. r. carter 2006-04-08 . chapter 1 I feel like a complete scheißekopf for not reviewing this. I know I started reading, but I guess I never finished and didn't leave a review. I'm slacking! ;.; Well, if it's any consolation, I think it's quite lovely. Him obsessing over Tifa's one bare ear is so undeniably Vincent-esque. I like getting lost in your stories. :) And it's been a while since I read any fanfiction, yet alone a Vincent and Tifa story -- reading this makes me miss such things!
Hehehe. Poor Vincent and his pesky urges to keep women's jewelry! Okay, that's not the reason, but if he started wearing it... Never mind. The last thing we need is a story where Vincent wears women's jewelry. Anyway, I think her giving him a kiss for the return of her earring was sweet. :)
Emerald Weapon, eh? *shudders* All that "7" crap and the like that I had to do. That fat bastard died, rest assured, but only after many fatal tries... (he *looked* fat to me -- all floatin' around like he owned the damn place). Er... Oh, right, and update your other story and all that jazz. :D
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 Darknightdestiny 2006-03-16 . chapter 1I'm so glad I found this story.
[smirks] I love "Vincent-wants-Tifa" stories. You made him so thoughtful in this one, so careful not to upset her mood, her wishes, her time alone.
And I really liked the part where she tugged him down to meet her face. Sly, you, how she left the kiss just an inch from his mouth. And very cute, how she imitated his tone.
Heh. She caught him. I like how you made her the center of his world, how even though there were hints of his self-loathing (Cloud is more deserving of her presence, he couldn't be loved for what he was, etc.), so much of his energy was expended in simply caring for her. He could barely even concentrate on Strife's orders because he was so wrapped up in what might have gone wrong with her.
Lovely fic. |
 Soporific 2006-03-14 . chapter 1Ahh.. Great character portrayal, both for Vincent and Tifa. ^^ I love how you managed to describe the feel of the atmosphere so perfectly.. It's awesome. Well done. ^^ |
 Arkash 2006-02-22 . chapter 1Cheers, another Vincent story, and for Valentine's Day.
Very nicely done. I like the way he hesitates before he walked up to her on the deck.
Oh, that's an absolutely great twist; her grandma's earring, given to her for Valentine's Day.
That was nice, the kiss, though I was hoping for a different kind of kiss. OK, maybe next time.
I'm not particularly fond of VD, and I mean the Feb. 14th and not the other kind, (shudder), but if so many of us dislike it, why do we celebrate?
Good Job, as always. *_* |
 Dellah Morte 2006-02-14 . chapter 1Aww... cuteness!! ^w^ I liked this part: "and quite frankly, he wanted to toss the earring overboard so he could focus on... more interesting things... " It made me laugh. More intresting things, hmm... ^_^;
I actually thought at first that he was going to keep her earring. And it wouldn't have been as cute if he'd just given it to her in the first place, anyway...
Anyway, this was really good! Write more soon! |
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