they're not that out of character. this was a very sweet one shot

*giggles* OH!! so adorable! i loved it. Gundam Seed is my fav. anime and i just love KiraAthrun fics! This one was great. glad i could read it. hee hee very very nice job. Very touching. *sniffles* I love it. Keep up the greatness! lol- Kari~*~

It's very sweet!^^ Keep writing!

Aw thats so cute! I love Athrun and Kira together! They are one if not my favorite couple! Keep writing you have a nack! Kira is cute! Dont worry I think you got their personalitys down pat excapt when you sad "I know he’s the type of person who wants to make people worried about him. He’s just like that." I dont think Kira is like that he never wants people to worry about him! Best og luck hopr you continue writing!