Love it!

xDD Ahahaha! I like this! This is definitely exactly the kind of conversation I have with Jack in my own head when I get stuck on something.

That's brilliant. Good job!

-Alori

Haha, cute. ^^

-doesn't like JackOC romance, doesn't like Jack with any sense of commitment at all-

Nicely written.

LOL

I liked a lot
Reminds me of the thought process when I think about Mary sues. ^.^

Col!! v.good you've got Jacks accent exactly.
You'll like my story, its about Jack its COMPLETELY JACK DEVOTED and it doesn't take long to read either as it only has three chapters in all. Its called 'the rum diary'
Please read and review!

Loved it! My favorite line:
"Aye, well you’re not the one who has to fall in love with every last one’”
Poor Jack. :)
'Mazed I've never seen this before, quite lovely actually.

quaint. very quaint. and funny. please write more

xD Nice. Completely agree with Jack 'bout the 'Sues

Awesome! It's like my "The Council of Legolas" and "Legolas vs. the Angst". WONDERFUL WRITING!

Heh, cute. ^^ I'm sure Jack will appreciate your efforts someday...