Totl awsomeness as always.

C.D.

Excellent POV writing! You have a very attractive writing style- I'll be looking over more of your stuff in the future!

would like to point out that the song savin me is slightly odd too. i love the song and think that this was really inspired by it. also it gives a great insight into the character of sandy.

brilliant

Very nicely done! The emotion comes through quite well in this piece; Sunstorm's a fun character who should have gotten more screen time. You've captured his personality and the desperation of a dying planet well.

u-huh *reads fic* this is a really good fic from sandy's point of view i can't wait for the next story and the next chaptr for Boiling Point please write them soon please