I'm not sure whether I got all the facts right: So Kim's mother is their doctor?

I really like this story, are there going to be more chapters?

Wow. Reading about what had happened to their mother was heart wrenching and very sad.
Excellent story telling on your part.

A great chapter, and very heavy, very sad one, at that. The appearence of Dr. Director and her connections with the family was a clever point, and the scenes with Kathleen are well done too. Good job! Awaiting the final chapter!

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This is quite good so far! Giving Mrs. Goshine powers and the side effects the glows are very different and cool. The use of the doctor's POV is a good touch, and adds to the unique plot to this story. I like what you're doing with this, and hope to see more!

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I hadn't read your original story but...this rewrite is very good.
Great opening chapter and I'm looking forward to reading the rest.

Hi there! I was just taking a look around and I found that I really like your fic! :)

Seriously, well done! Although I would like to find out what happened to Mrs. Go.

Looks pretty solid for a first time fic. ^^

Nice work.

Not terrible, not bad, a bit short, and VERY open ended. I enoyed it. A word of interest... You don't have to Shego's Mom any powers. The meteor that hit only hit the tree house. She could have been that way before the accident.