I was so enchanted by this conclusion. Very well done! I love this hesitant/bold version of their personalities. The perfect fit in a modern transition of their characters!

(“You think you had it tough. I practically had to sell my soul for him to agree to come. They’d better be grateful,” he sighed.)

That line was funny.
~Shippo

Nice to have a bit more of the story :) I particularly like the ear-stroking bit. a lot of people write about that but they don't always do it well.

aw i loved it please update soon

thats great

how cute but kind of sad

Cute! It would be kind of interesting to read the story of how Sango and Miroku got together- or see how they reacted when they finally realized that their friends had bailed on them.

YAY!!

that was good

yay kool

that was great

cute loved it

how sad ver well written though

Thank you! That was terrific! :)

Six days till my birthday and I'm already getting presents...That was delightful. Simply delightful. You have such a knack for presenting these characters through a modern lens...Wish I could pull it off half as well...