Interesting Fic...very interesting fic. You came up with very intricate backstories that all blended nicly together... as was the point. The backstories all seemed to fit well and the characters were well done. The end did seem to go by a bit fast. Some of the conflicts were solved with merely a sentance. But all in all it was a good read.

Moon

aside from the occasional driftage from historical facts a very good story. *

Hehehe loved it so good you write well!

This is super-cool! You don't particularly like Aramis, do you? Still, super-awesome! I love how you made them all mesh and work out alright in the end. The crazy family-friend thing with the main gang was great. I had my predictions partway through and I was right! Great job! I was reading and got so into it I pulled my chair closer and had to hold onto my cat. That proves that it was great, when you can do that to a reader. Other than a few minor mispellings and some easily overlooked added words, it was perfect! So totally awesome!

Great to reread this one again. I've missed all the great stories from the YB fanfic page. Keep it up!

wow i know i'm your only review but i do hope you continue your story. it is really good!!