this story is good, its intersting, i really like it. please update soon =)

i dont know what you are planning for next chapter but i have an idea that might interest you on who and how one or two people can help wyatt, chris and their cousings with their problems

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hay i like this story please update or continue it please

This story is fantastic!! I love the characters, I love the dynamics of the situation, I love all the details. I love the interaction between the family! I don't so much love the death of Ali :( I liked her, but I totally understand that it was necessary for a stronger story plotline...I hope you bring her back later...

Please, please, please update! I'm desperate to see what happens next.

This is a great story. I started reading today and I couldn't stop reading it. It was just that good. I can't wait to see the Halliwell/Dean/Montana family wage war against the legal system. I hope you update soon! I love this story!

Great story! UPDATE SOON!

wait a minute... his eyes flashed red? Hmm... does that means he's possessed? Is that really even Chris? Oh! I'm so curious now! I'm glad you updated. It's been awhile although that's understandable what with exams wrapping up. Great job on this. I'm a big fan! I hope you continue it!

this is a great story. i am hooked. please. please update soon.

Aw! Poor wyatt... Grr! Chris should lay off him! It's not his fault he had it easier than his bro... no one can blame him for wanting to hide his secrets!

wow!! secrets or what, lol =D looking forward to the net chapter!!

Oh, poor Wyatt!! He's got so many problems and doesn't know what to do!! Tell your family Wy! They're not just gonna leave you because you're bi-polar!! And SAM! I know he's angry and sad, the family all are, but to be cold to Wyatt, is just unfair!! You'd think he'd be slighty understanding specially with Wyatt's problem! And Chris seems to be the one going to member to member and ressauring everyone, he needs to take a break (not that he can with the freakin' police on his behind soon!) before HE loses it! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! This is AMAZING!! BTW, I'm glad Ali's gonna be a whitelighter, but not that she can't see her family!

Ooh! Talk about a deep chapter! Sigh! poor wyatt! I have to say though, I certainly like reading about this tortured versions of Wyatt... it's cute how he's the one who feels inferior when it had always been Chris who had felt inferior in the series. Mind you, chris always struck me as the smart one... particularly in the series final and in that episode from season 7 where future wyatt showed up... he was always spilling the beans on everything! He he! Loved how Chris smacked him for revealing who their uncle was! He's there for like 5 minutes and he already breaks the future consequences rule! ANYways! Great chap! I can see trouble building though... time travel book + sam = trouble! And the way wyatt is acting... Chris needs to start having some brotherly talks with his older bro cuz he is pretty clueless at the moment!

its cool thry vankwished the demon i hope ali will be all right what gonna do about the detective finding out?

great chapter update soon

Oh no! Ali! I know the girl had an attitude problem but I really hope she doesn't die! She's family after all! I wonder what they're going to say about what hapened. Hmm... This is all just craziness! Great chap though! very intense!

Uh-oh!Poor Ali.Hope she's okay!