Very interesting. I like where you are going with this. Please keep working and updating as much as you can, this seems to have a lot of potential.

Hooray! Thanks for the update! I love the way you write. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Hint. Hint.

so, you're really alive. it's good after all.

wow the story´s gettin good, i must know what happens next please update!
keep going.
adios

Pretty good chapter,but I think you misspelled the bell's name. I think it was either Nadia's Bell or Leene's Bell, but I could be wrong. Looking forward to the rest of the story!

I truly adore this story and where its going.
Can't wait for the next chapter!!
THANKS!

sweet story i like it keep on updating oh and i read fast mahahahahahha ilike it alot chao

I just found your story, and it's great, hope you update soon, I'll be looking forward to it.

By the way, what happened with your world domination plans? lol

Radius is one of my favorite characters i hope he has a big part. i also think that you are setting up the story very well i wonder how good it is when it gets more into the plot. thanks for the read.

you make mean Leena work, and the family's great. I', glad i read this one, because I've been reading some really bad ones.

This story is pretty interesting. I hope you keep coming up with more chapters.

GASP!! An update! WOOT!
I like your new character oodles(meaning alot). I'm sure the next few updates will be a blast to read!


P.S. I'm glad you're not dead!

Woot! An update! I wonder where Serge is now (if you made it obvious, I'm sorry, but I'm kind of dense...). Update soon, please and thank you!

I love your whole story so far, but this last one seems to be a written out form of Chrono Crosses prequil (forgot the name... Radical Dreamers maybe?) with a few extra twists and cut out stuff. Its still very good and I'm awaiting the next chapter anxiously :)

I'm interested in seeing where this is going, so please update soon. Though could you start a new paragraph everytime some one new is talking? Everything is kinda squished together, so I kinda tend to read the same line 6 times...