  Number 1 Poet 2006-10-18 . chapter 10Not bad but I prefer if Paige got shot instead of Alex but your way is far better than mine. NICE JOB! |
| dirrtysouf 2006-05-27 . chapter 10 Dean is such swine! I really loved your story it was really intense! Powerful stuff. |
| Lily 2006-05-08 . chapter 10 YOu might want to put a complete on this b/c it still shows up as a work in progress. |
| Daniela 2006-03-22 . chapter 10 Really liked your story and I hope you write more oneshots and more stories. |
| melodic frequency 2006-03-22 . chapter 10 that was sweet. great story! looking forward to ure one-shots. |
| AscaDuin 2006-03-22 . chapter 10 *tear* I am so sad right now. Not only because it was a sweet and touching ending, but because the story is finished. *tear*
On a happier note it was a great story and I enjoyed reading every chapter. I'm glad that you wrote a chapter story and that it turned out to be more than 3 chapters. I can't wait for your next stroy, whether it be a chapter story or a one-shot. Update soon! |
| HELENz 2006-03-21 . chapter 9 Very good. |
| Daniela 2006-03-20 . chapter 9 Thankfully you stuck to this story line,I really like it.Hopefully Alex's okay and Dean gets his ** put in jail.Update soon please. |
| Melodic Frequency 2006-03-20 . chapter 9 im glad u didn't go for the BtVS storyline. Really don't want to read something where Alex is a murderer. lol, great update. |
| Syd 2006-03-20 . chapter 9 Cool story. I love palex and I'm glad to see some fics out there.
In response to the A/N.. LOL. That just made me laugh hysterically, and remember in pain that horrible episode. :( I was so freaking mad at joss for that.. Gr.. |
| AscaDuin 2006-03-20 . chapter 9 Despite all that has happened in this chapter the first thing I must say is "GO JAY"! I hope Jay beats the crap out of Dean. I really, really hope that Alex is going to be okay. I'm glad that you didn't go the Willow route, that would have defenitly ruined the story. As glad as I am Jay did come to the rescue, I kind of wish he didn't because I think it would have made it more suspensful. I love the way the chapter was done though! Need to know what happens to Alex so update really, really, really soon! |
| Jeck 2006-03-19 . chapter 8 OMG! NO! DEAN IF YOU TOUCH PAIGE OR ALEX... I'LL... MURDER YOU! I hate cliffys... |
| PALEX1984 2006-03-18 . chapter 8 wow that was good i hope this is gonna get updated soon |
| AscaDuin 2006-03-18 . chapter 8 What?!?!?! This is a huge cliff hanger, this cannot happen. Nothing can happen to the girls. I admit it would be interesting to see how this plays out. You must update soon! |
| Lady.of.Peace 2006-03-18 . chapter 8 you need to post more soon. i love ths fic. i just found out about it today. |
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